FMA Drabble: One Last Thing

[lynx212]

Title: One Last Thing
Fandom: FMA
Pairing/Characters: Ed and Al Elric
Words: 100
Rating: T
Warning: Elricest
Summary: There was one last line they refused to cross.
A/N: Written for 100_men  complete table HERE  X posted to fandomwords100 and fanfic_bakeoff 


Nothing and no one lit up Al’s world like Ed did.

No one had as much passion.

No one’s smile was as bright.

No one made his heart soar like an eagle.

His brother was everything to him yet not quite enough. As close as they were there was still that line they refused to cross. Careful to back away from that hug in time. Careful not to let a hand linger too long.

Careful to look away before the desire is seen.

Ed was everything to his brother, except for this one last thing Al wanted him to be.

Comments

[nochick-fics.livejournal.com]

Very nice.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thanks babe...not sure how this turned to Elricest on me >.< but the prompt was Brother so my mind went AL!! of course and welll it turned into this as I typed...lol

[vexed_wench]

Nice job, this pair grows on ya'.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

It apparently is it just possessed me *see above comment to Lady C*

[nonmagicpoet.livejournal.com]

Wow, that is positively lovely.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thank you! They are growing on me... ^_^

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so intense. It has such longing... *dies*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*blushes*

Thank you my dear *kisses hand*

glomps your Hei icon

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

I loved this one so much it's been added to my Memories.

*can't help wishing you would write a sequel where Al gets his one last thing.*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Now there's an idea... I may just do so. (my muse is n fire today) If I do I shall dedicate it to you my dear ^_^

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Your requested sequel is up in my journal my dear...I hope you like it ^_^

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

Oh.My.GOD!>/i>

*Runs off to read at once*

[kiramaru7.livejournal.com]

Awe... that was rather bittersweet... *sighs*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

It was wasn't it? My angst muse is back and wants to play with morbid and humor ^_^

[baroqueangel.livejournal.com]

I was converted to this pair a while ago and this is a lovely little elricest drabble <3

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you as always little lady. If you are interested the sequel is now posted in my Lj ^_^

sees your kiddie Elric icon and raises you a kiddie Elric icon

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

OOh... I love the hint at incest!! So terribly wonderful to read, now if only they would cross that line... ;P
Sorry, you know me... I'm wicked and the more devious the kink the better... :D Love ya girl!!♥

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*blushes* I'm so glad you liked this on chic a dee. I am quite the deviant too so I am right there with ya! Loves ya back ♥

There is a sequel to this in my Lj now ^_^

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

Very nicely done. It has a real sense of longing.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thank you my dear. Good to know that came across.

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

You're welcome.

[havemy-heart.livejournal.com]

I love this! Hmm, not much else to say besides that ;D

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL well that is indeed enough. Thanks for the comment love ^_^

[chibidraco.livejournal.com]

I can completely see the brother complex evolve to where it straddles the line of propriety

So much emotion in such few words

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! My muse has recently developed a soft spot these two... and yes as a fan of the series (all versions) it is easy to see where the lines could blur.

there is a part two HERE (http://lynx212.livejournal.com/117231.html) to this in my Lj if you are interested.