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Title: Invidia: XXI
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Verse: Invidia
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lynx212
Words: 240
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Ed's still trapped and when there's finally a sliver of light he findshimself widhing for the darkness once more
Random Quote: Here we are, trapped in the amber of the moment. There is no why. ~Kurt Vonnegut
A/N: Dedicated to the lovely [livejournal.com profile] hpfangirl71 she has been patient beyond belief *hugs her*



Darkness and fear.

That’s all I’m aware of.

The complete darkness is ensuring that I have no concept of time so I have no idea how long I was out or how long I’ve been here. Every time I open my eyes it’s the same all consuming nothing that has greeted me since this nightmare began.

I’ve counted to 7,919 when I hear a shifting noise.

“Al?”

Nothing.

“Al is that you?”

No response but I hear more shuffling.

“Hello? Is someone… anyone in here?” I loathe the panic I hear in my own voice.

Silence, nothing but the same oppressive silence that has been my only companion for hours.

“Al if you’re in here please…”

“Please what, Brother?”

My head whips around so fast it hurts my neck. It sounds like he’s standing right behind me.

“Please what, Brother? Tell me.”

How long has Al been in here? Why is he doing this?

“Answer me.”

I don’t know what to say but I know I need to say something.

“Please Al. If this is some joke its gone way too far. Tell me what I need to do so this can end.”

The distinct sound of a match being struck fills the air and when Al lights whatever it is he’s holding, what I see terrifies me beyond words.

“This can’t end Brother because it’s only the beginning… our beginning.”

Roy… someone… anyone… help me… please find me soon.
 

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Date: 2012-07-23 02:08 am (UTC)
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)
From: [personal profile] amethyst_koneko
AAAAAAAHHH! Crazy!Al is back! Run! :) Don't worry Ed. Last I remember of this fic, Roy was on his way and should be knocking down your door any time now! I hope...

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Crazy Al has a plan and he won't be letting go of his prize so easily...

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Date: 2012-07-23 02:56 am (UTC)
vexed_wench: (Default)
From: [personal profile] vexed_wench
I love crazy Al, and here he will live up to the hype.
:D I am so glad you updated it.

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you chic a dee... I hope he does because he hasn't even begun to show his crazy just yet.

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Date: 2012-07-23 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
Crazy Al should be canon because he is awesome!!!!!

Roy needs to get there soon, with the psychiatrists in tow.

You know I love this <333

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Crazy Al could work all kinds of magic with the canon.

And Roy is going to need to have more than just the head doctors in tow... Al is a force to be reckoned with

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Date: 2012-07-23 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
OMG... Yay more!! Wow... Al is really far gone, isn't he?? I really love this storyline... every time I read this, I just want more and more... I'm very greedy!! Thanks ever so much for this... its amazing!! :D

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes*

Thank you so much for the praise my dear, and you are ever so welcome. Now that I've decided how crazy to make Al this may be updating faster.

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Date: 2012-07-23 06:10 am (UTC)
ext_1321913: (Default)
From: [identity profile] genjyosgirl.livejournal.com
I had to go back to the start and read through this! I'm fairly new to the comms, you see. It's chilling, a little sad, and I want moaaarrrr! Amazing stuff.

(I can't wait until Roy shows up to rescue Ed, but I can wait because I want to see what Al is up to...)

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it my dear.

I love writing dark, twisted Al. He has a plan and he is just as brilliant as his brother... Ed's rescue won't come easy

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Date: 2012-07-23 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com
Two comments:
AAAAHHHH!!! You updated!!!!! ::shouts of joy::
and EEEEEEKKKKK!!!! Crazy fuckin' Al....must run to rescue!Roy! where the hell are you????

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
SQUEEE at you comments ^_^

Roy has his work cut out for him. Al finally has what he's wanted for quite some time now... he won't be letting it go without a fight...

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Date: 2012-07-23 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sexkitten426.livejournal.com
Aww, poor Ed.

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*hugs him with you*

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Date: 2012-07-23 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shell-mel.livejournal.com
OMG! This is amazing! I totally love it so far. I can't wait to see what happens!

Just hope Roy doesn't try confronting Al alone. Have such a feeling that it'll all go downhill if he does.

Poor Ed. No automail, restrained and in the dark. Hope Roy can get to him before he starts to crack.

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Roy is going to have his work cut out for him when it comes to getting Ed away from Al. Al has thought this through... it will not be an easy task.

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Date: 2013-06-04 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shell-mel.livejournal.com
I can definitely see that by your latest update. Wow... Just Wow... Roy is going to have to go through hell and back just to see Ed, let alone get him out of there. I can't help but wonder if Al would go as far as to remove Roy from the picture permanently.

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Date: 2012-07-24 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad this has an update! *bounces* Crazy!Al is back!

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*bounces with you*

Thank you my dear it seems crazy Al has gathered a following ^_^

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Date: 2012-07-25 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
Crazy Al is back! Well worth the wait, Lynx.

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear I love Crazy Al too ^_^

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Date: 2013-05-30 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
You're welcome. ^_^

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Date: 2012-08-13 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pureevil230.livejournal.com
wow al is nuts hope roy and maes can find ed before al does something that really hurts ed and ed won't be able to recover from or al either. can't wait for more, update soon please!

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Date: 2013-05-26 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Roy and Maes are going to have their work cut for them when it comes to freeing Ed from Al... he has a plan and it doesn't involve letting Ed go.

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