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Title: Bad boy
Pairing: Inuyasha/Miroku

Rating: NC-17 (to be safe)
Warnigs: Inuyasha has a bit of a “daddy” fetish in this one *snickers*

Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters… if I did things would be a whole lot different.

 

 

Bad Boy

 

He’s snarling at me.

 

I knew following him to spy while he was talking to the undead priestess was a bad idea but something in me just had to know what was really between them. What I can’t believe is the fact that he talked to her, they hugged, then parted ways…friends? And here I was hoping to catch a little naughty action. Oh well, at least when I reassure Kagome now I can do it honestly.

 

All I know is that once she was out of earshot he moved with a swiftness–I have seldom seen him use–and plucks me out of my hiding spot and tosses my stunned form on the ground in front of him.

 

“Care to explain yourself Monk?”

 

No not really. All I would care for right now is to be on my way; but since that doesn’t seem to be a viable option I’ll go with plan B.

 

“Uh… well… you see I…”

 

“Save it Miroku. You were eavesdropping plain and simple.”

 

So I’m caught red-handed. What can be done about it now? 

 

“Well I offer you my sincerest apologies Inuyasha.”

 

An evil glint flashes in his eyes and a shiver races up my spine.

 

“That’s not good enough this time Houshi.”

 

Now I’m worried.

 

“So what can I do to atone for my indiscretions?”

“Save your words. I know how to fix this.”

 

I don’t get a chance to inquire about his meaning. Before I can react he scoops me up and when my world stops spinning he is sitting on a fallen tree and has me splayed across his lap.

 

“Uh Inuyasha…”

 

WHACK! His hand descended upon my backside and the sting it left behind was unreal.

 

“Have you lost your min…”

 

WHACK! That sting was now humming twofold.

 

“I told ya to save your words. You’re the one that had to go peaking in on daddy’s conversation so this is what you get.”

 

Daddy? What kind of madness is he playing at here?  

 

“Now wait just a minute I think…”

 

WHACK!! Dear sweet Buddha the sting was gone and now my ass is burning like there’s no tomorrow. Every time I open my mouth to speak, he rains down his own form of justice on my defenseless hide.

 

Once part of the shock wares off I start paying more attention to what the Hanyou is saying. WHACK “I know what you were hoping to see Monk.” WHACK! “If you want to play come out and play don’t hide in the shadows.” WHACK!  “Daddy doesn’t like it when his favorite boy misbehaves.”

 

It is strange how his words start to affect my body. At first I think Inuyasha has lost his tenuous hold on his sanity; but then I slowly realize he’s playing…acting. I am not sure what has prompted such spirit in him and I’m not sure how to feel about it. On one hand my physical person is all about his little game; but my mind is having a few issues with this new side of him.

 

In the midst of my musings I feel my robes moving up. As the cool night air makes contact with my exposed behind I gasp out loud. What is he up to now? With an agonizingly slow movement the Hanyou drags a single claw down the small of my back and over the curve of my ass.

 

A muffled whimper escapes me despite my efforts to contain it.

 

“You like this don’t you?”

 

I truly don’t know how to respond to that. I do, but I don’t. I want more, but I also want him to stop. This is humiliating, but it is exciting something within me as well.

 

WHACK! “Answer me!” he demands loudly.

 

When I say nothing I feel his hand snake around my waist then a surprisingly gentle finger runs the length of my swollen member.

 

“I think I’ve found my answer.” He whispers in a voice that makes my aroused state even worse. Where did that tone come from? Since when did Inuyasha know how to seduce anyone? What the hell have I gotten my perverted ass into?

 

WHACK! Oh that was an extra hard blow on my bare bottom but this time he let his hand linger. As he slowly massages my ass and sack I can feel the ache settle in my loins. By the gods he is skilled with his hands. If he can do all of this with one hand and a few words …

 

I don’t get to think much more because he leans over me and licks my back.

 

I melt. Like the wanton little man whore I am.

 

He continues his dual assault on my body for only Kami knows how long: His hands kneading my balls, smacking my ass and caressing my thighs and his mouth and tongue kissing me, licking me, tasting me.

 

Just when I decide I never want this to end, it does. Stunned and panting I dared to look up at him for the first time since all of this began and his eyes are serious. Not knowing what to say or how to say it I just stare at him.

 

“Before we go any further I want you to tell me you want this.”

 

I do, I know I do…don’t I? How much further does he plan on taking this? Do I really even care? No I don’t. I know at this moment I will go where ever he wants to lead me. I don’t care if it’s toward bliss or oblivion…and in a way I’m praying for both.

 

Now how do I tell him this? How do I let him know I want to be a player in this game?

 

With my decision made, little by little I push my aching body up until I’m sitting on his lap and for a moment I continue to stare into those golden orbs. When my senses come back I place my head on his shoulder and in the most innocent voice I can muster I say, “Miroku’s sorry and he’s ready for his punishment now.”

 

A devious fanged smile, that I don't have to see to know it's there, spreads across his face and I shudder in anticipation. So that whole “If you want to come out to play” thing was an offer of sorts huh? Well who am I to refuse?

 

He rolls his shoulder and I take it as a hint and lift my head. When I do he grabs my chin and maneuvers my face so I am looking dead at him and with a smirk he says, “You know daddy loves you but you have to learn to listen.”

 

Like a child I pout and nod at him. He then brings his lips down upon mine and I can’t help but think if this is punishment I’ll have to “misbehave” more often.

 

With a skill and grace he shouldn’t posses at this he coaxes my mouth open and when his tongue slides in I moan into his mouth and I can feel his lips smiling against mine. My back arches as my body attempts to bring me closer to him. I want nothing more than to drown in this sensation. I could easily lose myself in this and forget the world.

 

I am.

 

I am lost in this and I don’t care.

 

An arm with strength that belies its size wraps around me and he lowers us to the forest floor. I am now kissing him with an abandon that shows him… that shows me just how much I need this. Want this.

 

He’s undoing my robes and I am struggling to get the blasted knot out of his obi. I growl in frustration and he laughs quietly at my dilemma. “Eager to receive your punishment little one?”

 

I don’t answer I simply continue working on the obi. He lifts up my right leg and…WHACK! “I asked you a question.”

 

I can’t believe he’s demanding me. Commanding me…ordering me to answer…I love it.

 

“Yes.” I whisper. WHACK! My body quivers and a desperately loud, “YES!” is wrenched from my throat.

“That’s a good boy.” He says as he gets rid of the knot in his obi for me. Once he tosses the articles of clothing that had once covered his upper body aside I find myself regarding his bare chest in a new light. I run my fingers across his collarbone and down to his nipples and when I pinch them I can feel him tremble in response as a small whine escapes him.

 

He lowers his head and begins kissing his way down my torso. That aching slowness is back and when his tongue dips into my navel my hips start to rock back and forth of their own accord.

 

It’s like my body is possessed. I can’t think past this moment, my raw need and him. When he takes my aching manhood into his mouth I almost cry out in pleasure. It doesn’t take long for that moist heat to bring me to completion and when I do cum, emptying my seed into his mouth, his name tumbles over my lips at a volume that clearly says I don’t give a damn who hears me.

 

As I laid there panting he was grinning at me in a way that made my blood pound in my ears. The predatory look in his eyes made me almost want to beg for what I knew was coming next. What in all the hells was he waiting for? Take me. I am here before you naked and needy what more do you need, my mind screamed.

 

Then, as if he heard my thoughts he says, “Say it…tell me. I want to hear it come out of that sweet little mouth of yours.”

 

He makes me feel dirty and wanted all in the same breath. How? I don’t know but again I don’t care. All shame is now forgotten. As a slave to my own needs I get up on all fours, crawl over to him, look him in the eyes and utter, “Miroku wants his daddy to fuck him senseless. He’s been a bad boy and he needs to be taught a lesson.”

 

His eyes flash and my heart skips a beat. He brings two fingers up to my lips and my mouth opens eagerly and I lick and swirl my tongue around them until he withdraws them. He pulls me close to him and I can feel one of those two digits playing at my entrance.

 

When he works it in I gasp at the feeling. He captures my mouth and the mix of sensations causes my head to spin. At some point in time he pushed the second finger inside me but I am too far gone at this point to do much more than writhe in his embrace.

 

While he’s working those fingers in and out of me he hits something that makes my body all but seize up. When I can move I look up at him with questioning eyes, “I would have never figured your perverted ass had never tried this. I guess my favorite boy behaves better than I thought.”

 

I know I’m blushing like a madman right now but before I can think about his words further he hits that spot again and I all but collapse against him. Once I started pushing back against his thrusting fingers he slows their movement and begins to scissor them slowly.

 

When he pulls them out I whine at the loss. “Don’t worry,” he says and I notice he’s almost as breathless as I am, “it’s about to get better.”  

 

When he lowered me back to the forest floor I got my first good look at the erection he is sporting.

 

It’s impressive to say the least.

 

Instead of feeling nervous at the sight of it, it just made my own re-hardened cock twitch in anticipation for what was to come. I reach out and wrap my hand around it and his eyes close and he moans for me. The knowledge that I caused that reaction in him made my pulse race. When I start stroking him with a steady rhythm his breath quickens and before long his arms start to tremble. He backs away and his cock slides out of reach and I can feel the frown on my face.

 

He smiles at me and leans down to lick the head of my member. “Easy there, Miroku. If you keep that up the shows gonna be over before we get to the main event.”

 

He moves up until his body is over mine and kisses me hard enough to make that frown disappear from even my memory. I can feel his cock at my entrance and when he starts to push I am surprised at the minimal discomfort. I guess I want this more than I initially thought. Once he carefully got past that first ring of muscles he gradually slid his entire cock into my body. I open my eyes to find him staring at me; I smile and nod to let him know I’m fine. A few moments later I was wiggling under him ready for more.

 

That first full thrust hit that spot again and my head snapped back and some guttural noise passes my lips. Over and over he hits that spot within me and before long I’m gasping, moaning and calling his name again and again like it’s some sexual mantra. As his thrusts grow more urgent he’s doing his own fair share of growling and panting. When he touched my face I found myself opening eyes I hadn’t realized I’d closed again. I see the sweat that decorates his brow, the silver tresses that cling to his face and I think that I’ve never seen him look better. When my eyes meet his I can clearly see that his pupils are dilated with lust and I can only imagine that I look about the same.

 

My eyes start to drift shut again but one particularly hard thrust later and they snap open. As he drove into my body relentlessly he looks into my unfocused eyes and whispers, “Come for me.” And to my surprise I do and he immediately follows.

 

As we lay there panting my mind is reeling in a hundred directions and all of them centered around us doing some sort of repeat of this as soon as I can see straight. When I roll over to look at him he smirks at me and asks, “You feel like you’ve learned your lesson?”

 

I adamantly shake my head no. He looks confused but I swiftly clear that up, “No, I think Miroku needs Daddy to punish him all over again.”

 

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Date: 2008-02-20 06:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] vexed_wench
YAY!!!! You posted it!

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Date: 2008-02-20 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
That I did. I got it proof read this morning ...made a few changes... and VOILA!

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Date: 2008-02-20 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphyre-kikyo.livejournal.com
Well, while that was WAY different from my normal reading...I loved it.

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Date: 2008-02-20 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Tee hee glad you liked it (especially since its not your norm) I am new at this whole smut thing but I thought I would give it a try. *hugs*

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Date: 2008-02-21 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenerik-brand.livejournal.com
WOW. That was pretty intense. I love the lines you gave Inuyasha, too.

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Date: 2008-02-21 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thanks *blushes at receiving comment from one of my fav smut writers* I'm not sure where this whole daddy thing came from for Inu but I just went with it. ^_^

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Date: 2008-02-21 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saraste-impi.livejournal.com
I melt. Like the wanton little man whore I am. Such a slutty little line.<3

This was great. And for a first smut so delicious and not corny (that's where some people fall in the first time...) Wonderful. And I loved the daddy thing though it's really not my cup of tea normally.

And yes, loved the spanking.

More!!!

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Date: 2008-02-21 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* Thanks! My husband loved that line as well. My twisted little mind just took this idea and ran with it. I was only gonna do a short little piece that just alluded to smut but it took on a life of its own in the process. (I'm glad it did) ^_^ thanks for reading and I'll probably keep up with the prompts as they come out now that I've gotten over my smut writing shyness *giggle*

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Date: 2008-02-21 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saraste-impi.livejournal.com
It's so hard to only allude smut. Especially with these two, I've heard Liz bemoaning the fact copiously. I'm glad it took the lead too and made you go for a ride in man smut land. (A district of yaoi heaven...) Yay, happy happy.^^ The first smut is I think the hardest, gets easier after that. I think. Well I started with smut and mpreg in my first real fanfic. I did make one once for an online comic called FTLY that no-one remembers anymore that I never published and therefore I don't count it as my first. S you see, I was perverted from the start...

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Date: 2008-02-22 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Nothing wrong with that (I like you that way) ...and I like this smut land idea it made my muse happy *wicked grin*

Yaoi Noob :'D

Date: 2008-06-04 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Somehow, I'm not uncomfortable reading this :D You must be the second coming of Jesus to have that affect on me, especially considering that I’m new to yaoi (and, particularly, yaoi smut) and I’m a total nihilist XD I’ve tried to read things like this before, but I always end up closing the browser half way through because I just feel really awkward reading about a pairing that isn’t quite my cup of tea, but I got through this one rather painlessly and mostly mentally unscathed XD So InuYasha’s a “Daddy” kind of guy, is he? So odd... My InuYasha is totally submissive and a complete masochist when it comes to sex (Kagome’s a self-proclaimed Dom), though I suppose mine is an odder take to most than yours is ^^


--BaKa-NEKO

Re: Yaoi Noob :'D

Date: 2008-06-06 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Tee hee ... I could see Kagome being a dom behind closed doors. She certainly likes to have things her way. *giggle*

Glad you enjoyed the little bit of smut I had to offer and that it didn't scar you for life...WELCOME TO YAOI!! ^_~

and let me know where your fics are I would like to read them. If you've already told me remind me my brain is scattered these days...

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