FMA: Two OT3 Roy/Ed/Russell Drabbles
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fanfic_bakeoffForgot the mail he said.
Bullshit Roy thought as he opened the backdoor and found a topless Ed sprawled out on the porch swing reading. One leather clad leg bent at the knee and the other hanging over the side of the swing. His automail hand was holding the book as the other hand mindlessly trailed up and down his stomach.
The door clicking shut caught Ed’s attention causing bright amber eyes to peek over the book just before a smirk painted his face and he winked at Roy.
He was so dumping baking soda in Russell’s mouthwash for this.
fanfic_bakeoffMustang was going down!
It was noon and he could still taste nothing but baking soda when he swallowed. If it’s a dirty war Roy wanted that’s exactly what Russell would give him. He hated to pull out the big guns so soon but the baking soda thing was a dirty move.
Russell and Ed had the day off and Roy always came home for lunch at 12:17 like clockwork.
Which happened to be the precise time Russell had Ed’s cock down his throat in the middle of the kitchen.
Watching the man limp back to work had been priceless.
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Date: 2012-02-25 03:32 am (UTC)That was just evil! Can't wait to see how Roy gets him back for this! ^_^
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Date: 2012-02-25 05:26 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2012-02-25 05:28 pm (UTC)*icon love*
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Date: 2012-02-25 03:52 pm (UTC)*puts on my beta hat* Yoiu switched tenses here: "...to peek over the book just before a smirk paints his face and he winks at Roy." The rest was all written in past tense this is present. XD Quick fix: change "winks" to ""winked" & "Paints" to "painted." ;p
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Date: 2012-02-25 05:25 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-02-25 09:10 pm (UTC)Awe... *huggles* Read it over out loud, that might help you catch it. I tend to over do commas at times. ^^;
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Date: 2012-02-25 05:57 pm (UTC)I have become convinced that Ed is the *real* mastermind behind all of this-- making his lovers all hot and bothered. Regardless of outcome, Ed wins.
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Date: 2012-02-26 07:56 pm (UTC)But yes you are correct no matter what Ed so wins... LOL *hugs*
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Date: 2012-02-26 12:23 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2012-02-28 12:33 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-02-26 05:32 pm (UTC)Mustang was going down!
Heh. I bet he is. >:D
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Date: 2012-02-26 08:00 pm (UTC)and lol at your commentary ^_^