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Title: Gratification
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Verse: Elricest
Author: Little ole me ^_^
Genre: Smut/Kink
Words: 300
Rating: M
Summary: Al finally gives his Brother what they've both been wanting...
Warnings: Incest
Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic_bakeoff and ETM: Elricest The Movement can be read alone or taken as a sequel to But Please.


Al had kept him hard for hours.

He was currently running his tongue up the length of Ed’s shaft, stopping just before the head, then blowing over his overly excited cock.  He’d do this a couple of times before sitting back and watching Ed writhe due to the loss of sensation. Smile firmly in place, a naked Al sat in full view of Ed, stroking his cock as he teased Ed’s legs and balls with the toes.

“Brother you have no idea what a turn on it is seeing you like this.”

“Please, Al… please don’t drag this on any longer.”

“Don’t worry Brother it’s almost over but only because I refuse to cum anywhere but inside that perfect little ass of yours.”

Al crawled onto the bed between his brothers spread legs and slipped two oil slicked fingers inside Ed’s body. Once he could do more than moan Ed asked Al why he hadn’t untied him yet.

“Because I want to watch your face as I send you over the edge. I want to see those lips screaming my name and begging me to fuck you harder.”

Al slid into Ed’s body and the achingly slow pace he set was driving Ed mad.

“Al…”

“You don’t get what you want until I get what I want.”

“Al… more please.”

Al grabbed Ed’s hips increased his pace only to slow again, “I can’t hear you Brother.”

When Al all but stopped Ed shouted, “The only thing I want to feel is your dick inside me! I want you filling me, stretching me, and fucking me until I can’t walk!”

Ed asked and Al delivered. It didn’t take much of that to send them both over the edge.

Sated to the point of exhaustion, the Elric brothers drifted off to sleep.


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Date: 2012-02-21 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
What a way to wake up! *splutter*

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* glad I could make your morning (or whatever..lol) babe!! *hugs on you* The brother's are so much fun ^_^

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Date: 2012-02-21 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sexkitten426.livejournal.com
Hours sounds painful & potentially damaging, but admittedly sexy. They both got what the wanted in the end. We asked for more Elricest, & you delivered!

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thank you my dear I love making Al anything but sweet and innocent... I need to get back to Invidia!

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Date: 2012-02-21 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com
Al... you're such a tease! ;p

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
I think I shall write more...

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com
YAY!! And I shall read it & enjoy it! :D

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Date: 2012-02-21 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nidamelani.livejournal.com
Are these the continuation of yesterday story?
Al is so sexy and naughty hehehehe, at least as I read these my image of Al suddenly changes into a wild, sexy, sadistic seme, good job for bringing me smut mature incest yaoi XD

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Date: 2012-02-23 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
LOL indeed it is.

I like taking Al to places he doesn't get to go in most fanfics ^_^

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Date: 2012-02-21 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patheticnemesis.livejournal.com
*flails*
OMIGOD. You've reduced me to fish imitations. I clearly have no words.

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Date: 2012-02-23 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thank you my dear so glad you enjoyed it... I like naughty Al.

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Date: 2012-02-21 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
*Happy sigh*

<333

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Date: 2012-02-23 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*hugs on you*

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thanks little lady ^_^

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Date: 2012-02-24 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
You're welcome. ^_^

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Date: 2012-02-22 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
Not sure how I missed this but better late than never.

I just LOVE seeing Al like this, so dirty and raunchy and slutty and hot. Mmmmm.

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh heh*

I love Al like this to I love taking him to places like this. He's portrayed so sweet and innocent in most fanfics i like to sully him a little bit

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
YES.

I can't believe I ever found him so innocent knowing damn well he's such a sexual deviant, lol. :D

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*giggles* You did a pretty good job slut-ing him up in Roy's Boy's... just saying

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Date: 2012-02-24 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
You wish is my command...

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Date: 2012-04-26 08:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
OMFG... How the hell did I miss this sexy little tidbit?! I love it when Al tops... He's so amazing when he's taking control and making Ed beg... fucking hott as hell hun!! <3

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