lynx212: (ETM: Tree)
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Title: But Please
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Verse: Elricest 
Author: Little ole me ^_^
Genre: Smut/Kink
Words: 267
Rating: M
Summary: Al has his Brother in an interesting situation...
Warnings: Incest


“Al… Al please...”

Al didn’t answer. He merely kept doing what he was doing.

“Al, I can’t… I just… ahhh,” Ed’s sentence broke off into a whine as Al fixed another clamp onto his nipple.

“You can and you will,” Al replied as he raked blunt nails down Ed’s side.

“But please Al it’s been hours and… and…”

“And you will survive Brother, you always do. But if you’d rather I stop…”

“NO!” was Ed’s breathless, shouted reply, “No Al, don’t stop just please let me cum... I’ll… I’ll do anything you want.”

Al snickered at him and said, “You were going to do that anyway. You’re not really in a position to do much else.”

Al’s words caused Ed to tug at the leather straps that had his arms bound over his head. He knew he couldn’t budge them and for and instant he missed his automail. Sure this was all fun and games but playing helpless and actually being helpless was two different things.

It might be why it turned him on so much.

He had always known Al was the more patient one out of the two of them but he’d kept Ed like this for over two hours. Who knew his little brother was such a damn sexual sadist.

“Don’t worry Brother,” Al said as he leaned forward, dipped his tongue into his bound siblings navel. “I promise it’ll be worth the wait.”

As Al’s mouth traveled lower Ed’s back arched off the bed and he knew the end result would indeed be worth every torturous moment he had to wait for it.



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Date: 2012-02-19 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
Verrrrrry nice!!!

Write more! :D

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* I think I shall before this prompt is over at bakeoff... it begs for Elricest don't you think?

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
While I'm not longer doing bakeoff, I will definitely enjoy reading whatever bit of this sexiness you post to your journal. :-)

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
You quit the bakeoff...? *sniffs*

But thank you for always reading and commenting babe *hugs on you* the next part is up!
Edited Date: 2012-02-21 02:46 am (UTC)

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Date: 2012-02-21 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
I'll PM you about it later.

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Date: 2012-02-21 03:19 am (UTC)
vexed_wench: (Default)
From: [personal profile] vexed_wench
I am very sorry to see this :(

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Date: 2012-02-21 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
So am I, tbh.

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Date: 2012-02-19 07:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patheticnemesis.livejournal.com
Mm, captive!Ed never fails to get the heart (and other things) pumping. That was hot ;)

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*smirks* I totally agree with the above statement. Your icon is so made of awesome by the way...

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patheticnemesis.livejournal.com
Photobucket. It answers all my icon needs which mostly include levels of win. (went back and read this and still squirmed in my chair; niice)

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thanks my dear *hugs* I hope you enjoy part two just as much *hugs more*

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Date: 2012-02-19 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
You just killed me stone dead...

*fans face frantically*

How did you know I'm in such an Elricest place at the moment? You're like a genius!

*memories*

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Date: 2012-02-19 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
*stalks sexy icon, may possibly snag*

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
I don't blame you my dear... that icon = awesome
Edited Date: 2012-02-20 11:12 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes*

I am so glad you enjoyed this my dear I really do need to finish that list of 30 prompts for ETM...

your icon=HAWT

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Date: 2012-02-19 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sexkitten426.livejournal.com
The bit about playing helpless & actually being helpless really made me think. He plays helpless to distract bad guys, but he's only been truly helpless in saving Al. Worth the wait for sure!

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* so glad you enjoyed this my dear I had a blast writing it. And yes... I am sure Al made it worth every torturous moment Ed spent waiting.

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Date: 2012-02-19 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
You should definately write more of them, tell us all about sadist Al :D

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* I do need to finish the list of 30 Elricest prompts... this may happen...

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Date: 2012-02-19 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slinkslowdown.livejournal.com
Niiiiiiiiiiiice >:D

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear *hugs*

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Date: 2012-02-19 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] remaintobreathe.livejournal.com
Oooh, so sexy! Gotta love a helpless Ed and torturous Al...

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Al just strikes me as the type.... it's always the quiet ones you have to watch ya know?

*icon love*

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] remaintobreathe.livejournal.com
Yes, the quiet ones have more to work out :>

And this is like one of my favourite icons ever, it's so pervy and dorky at the same time XD

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
SO very true... and yes this icon of yours is great in many was it's Epic WIN!
Edited Date: 2012-02-21 02:41 am (UTC)

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Date: 2012-02-21 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] remaintobreathe.livejournal.com
And your icon lets me know it! XD Total win.

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Date: 2012-02-19 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kirathaune.livejournal.com
Whoa. *reaches for a cold drink*

I especially liked the part where Ed missed his automail!

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Date: 2012-02-20 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
thank you my dear Al just strikes me as the kinky type and would Ed ever tell his precious brother no? I don't think so...

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Date: 2012-02-20 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nidamelani.livejournal.com
OMG Al so naughty XDD
my heart is beating fuhuhuhuhu
please write more I want to know the continuation

(no subject)

Date: 2012-02-20 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* thank you my dear I think I am feeling rather inspired to do just that... *hugs8

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