FMA: Double Whammy: Devastation

[lynx212]

Title: Double Whammy: Devastation 
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: It would ruin it if I told you... but I will say it is yaoi
Words: 300
Genre: Romance/Drama/Angst/Smut
Rating: M
Warnings:  None
Summary: Roy still can't wrap his brain around what he's seen and Maes and Ed don't know how to help him...

Previous: Here

Walking in on your ex blowing your best friend had to be devastating.

Was there anything either of them could say to make this hurt any less for the man leaning on the counter glaring death and hurt at the two of them? No, Maes didn’t think there was a damn thing that could be said and apparently Ed thought the same if the younger man’s silence on the matter was anything to go by. Ed was making it a point to not even look in Roy’s direction while Maes couldn't do anything but look at him.

Roy had his arms folded across his chest and jaw locked so tight everyone could hear his teeth grinding. Cold dark eyes narrowed at Ed, “Why didn’t you tell me this is why you wanted to leave?”

Ed snorted and replied with, “Oh I could see that going over well and not causing a problem. It’s not working out between us and I’m in love with you best friend by the way. Have a nice life. I couldn't lie to you Roy that’s why I gave you no explanation.”

Roy started to say something when he caught Maes shooting Ed a worried look and said, “More than a decade of friendship and this is what it earns me?”

“This wasn’t done to hurt you Roy.”

“Go to hell, Maes.”

“I could and it still wouldn’t change the fact Ed doesn’t love you.”

The fury in Roy’s eyes died out and the anguish that replaced it was hard to look at. Choking on his own misery, Roy left the kitchen without a word.

“What the hell do we do now, Maes?”

“Your guess is as good as mine Ed. All I know is we need to do something.”

Comments

[ca11iope.livejournal.com]

Ouch. Take that Roy, right in the nuts. And what about Gracia? Looking forward to the next. :)

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

yeah this is a nut shot for Roy like nobodies business... it's not going to get better anytime soon.

[kyofujimiya.livejournal.com]

Owwww...Roy... T_T Looking forward to seeing where this is going, even if Roy's probably not going to like it.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

Yeah Roy is soooo not gonna like this but he's going to have to endure it anyway

[baroqueangel.livejournal.com]

Ouch. Nothing like the truth to leave you in pain. Poor Roy *hugs him*

<333

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

Yeah the phrase the truth hurts is so true indeed... so painfully true.

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

Ouch.

Is it wrong that I want this to resolve itself with a threesome?

[azur-dreams.livejournal.com]

i second that!

[hikaru-9.livejournal.com]

No, that is not wrong, that is very, very good. :D

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

LOL.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

LOL no it isn't wrong of you to want that at all my dear... who doesn't love a good threesome ^_^

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

*hugs back* There are always comments that get lost in the shuffle.

Indeed. ^_^

[amethyst_koneko]

"I could and it still wouldn’t change the fact Ed doesn’t love you."

Fucking hell Maes! Could you BE any more cold about this?? shit...

What the hell do we do now, Maes?"

tch. Whatever it is, it's too little too late now. jeez...

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

Yeah that was more than a little harsh regardless of how true it is... this fic will be an emotional rollarcoaster for sure

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

Never thought I'd say this... but poor Roy. Ed and Maes sure did a number on him!! :(

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

Yes they did hence the name of this fic... thought it would be fitting ;)

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

*hugs back* RL happens... :D

[jayanx.livejournal.com]

It was blunt, but sometimes the best thing is to just tell thjje truth, no matter how much it hurts, leading him on or trying to lie would be worse in the long run, and it seems to me from the last lines that neither Ed or Maes want to hurt Roy, and they do want to try to make it right, but neither do they want him to harbor any false hope. I hope they do figure out a way to work it out, a decade of friendship is a terrible thing to lose, and just because a romatic relationship isn't in the cards doesn't mean a freindship can't be built once Roy is able to deal with his feelings of loss and betryal.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

Very well put my dear. Sometimes things in life and love don't work out the way you intend or want it to and all you can do is try to move on. Only time shall tell how Roy handles this but its gonna be a bumpy ride...

[jayanx.livejournal.com]

Thank you, although going back and reading it I'm cringing from the spelling and grammatical errors. Sorry, I really need to remember to edit after I have the epiphany.

I like to think he's going to make it, life is filled with disappointments and dreams that don't come true, but the true test of a person is how they deal with it and grow because of them. Flowers can't bloom without a little rain.

[hikaru-9.livejournal.com]

Personally, I feel that Roy would wallow in cold revenge plots or be convinced that he deserves this for being a monster in the war in Ishval rather than just choking on his sorrow. However, I do enjoy his suffering :D as I am a sadist.

Also yay Hughes/Ed! LOL my brain is gibberish over that. I am also curious as to how Hughes can feel that cheating on Gracia and betraying his own family and best friend are okay? Ed is young, and can be forgiven this indiscretion in the face of hormones and delicious lust, but Maes is a man who is loyal to a fault. I do hope you plan to tackle this :D I think it would really add to the fic series you've got going here! I look forward to more.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

As you may have seen by the recent post I have some of your issues all ironed out my dear but Roy's suffering ha only just begun... all of their emotional wounds will be laid bare by the time this fic is all said and done

[halighfataliter.livejournal.com]

Damn, that hurt so good! I swear someone was squeezing my heart by the end and considering it is only 300 words, I'd say that's quite a feat! Are Ed and Maes (MAES?!?) heartless? I both want to hug Roy, have you write an happier ending for him in the next chapters (?) and have him hurting a little bit more, because he is just too yummy this way! *drool*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*

come on baby make it hurt so good... lol couldn't resist Anywho I too enjoy Roy's suffering so you are not alone. Maes and Ed may seem heartless but all will be revealed soon my dear... like today even lol

[vexed_wench]

Poor Roy
You owe him some fluffy loving' after all of this.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh shit how did I not reply to these lovely comments sooner >.< So much fail on my part *hugs*


Y es I owe him and Ed a ton of Fluff after the hell I've put them through the last 2 months...lol

[havemy-heart.livejournal.com]

I remember reading the first chapter and somehow missed all of the subsequent chapters :( Anyway, I don't even know who to feel the most sorry for in this situation. Roy just got a knife to the heart, but if Ed and Maes love each other, there's not a whole lot else they can do.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

No worries *hugs*

And so very true this is the epitome of one of those situations where its gonna suck for everyone involved no matter what... poor boys I torture them so...

[nochick-fics.livejournal.com]

Whoa, why have I never seen this?????

Must. read. more.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

YAY glad you liked it!!

Maes/Ed is a secret love of mine and I just had to do it while taking the angst up a notch...

Do feel free to share your thoughts on this series babe *HUGS*