Invidia: XV
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lynx212Title: Invidia: XV
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
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lynx212
Words: 297
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al has had it with his Brother's antics, he's at the end of his rope and everyone will know it soon...
Random Quote: “Our frustration is greater when we have much and want more than when we have nothing and want some. We are less dissatisfied when we lack many things than when we seem to lack but one thing.” ~ Eric Hoffer
Previous Parts: I II III IV V VI VII VIII IX X XI XII XIII XIV
How could you Brother? How could you do this to me…to us?
You flounce back into OUR home wearing HIS ring! You said yes, the no good bastard asked you to marry him and like the fool he’s made you into, you said yes. You are all but twirling around the kitchen as you tell me about this fantasy week where you undoubtedly gave as much of your soul away as you did your body. You are talking so fast I can barely hear you over the chorus of vicious thoughts racing through my mind.
You finally notice my silence and your smile melts into concern. You ask me if I am ok with the decision you’ve made and when I reply with, does it matter, you look at me as if I’d just slapped you across the face.
Which is exactly what I want to do.
You suddenly look so concerned when over the last five years all I’ve wanted you to do is notice me. But it takes me rocking your happy little Mustang boat for you to realize I have feelings too. You reach out for me and when I move away I can see the rejection I live with everyday finally plastered across your pretty face.
You call my name but I ignore you as I walk away.
You follow me and plead for me to talk to you and tell you what’s wrong. The question infuriates me with you in a way I can barely control. To keep from hurting you I merely glare at you hard enough to stop you in your tracks, storm into my room and slam the door.
He can’t have you Brother, even if it’s painfully clear now that you want nothing more than to be taken.
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
lynx212 Words: 297
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al has had it with his Brother's antics, he's at the end of his rope and everyone will know it soon...
Random Quote: “Our frustration is greater when we have much and want more than when we have nothing and want some. We are less dissatisfied when we lack many things than when we seem to lack but one thing.” ~ Eric Hoffer
Previous Parts: I II III IV V VI VII VIII IX X XI XII XIII XIV
You flounce back into OUR home wearing HIS ring! You said yes, the no good bastard asked you to marry him and like the fool he’s made you into, you said yes. You are all but twirling around the kitchen as you tell me about this fantasy week where you undoubtedly gave as much of your soul away as you did your body. You are talking so fast I can barely hear you over the chorus of vicious thoughts racing through my mind.
You finally notice my silence and your smile melts into concern. You ask me if I am ok with the decision you’ve made and when I reply with, does it matter, you look at me as if I’d just slapped you across the face.
Which is exactly what I want to do.
You suddenly look so concerned when over the last five years all I’ve wanted you to do is notice me. But it takes me rocking your happy little Mustang boat for you to realize I have feelings too. You reach out for me and when I move away I can see the rejection I live with everyday finally plastered across your pretty face.
You call my name but I ignore you as I walk away.
You follow me and plead for me to talk to you and tell you what’s wrong. The question infuriates me with you in a way I can barely control. To keep from hurting you I merely glare at you hard enough to stop you in your tracks, storm into my room and slam the door.
He can’t have you Brother, even if it’s painfully clear now that you want nothing more than to be taken.
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Date: 2011-05-16 11:48 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:06 am (UTC)Everyone that gets in Al's way needs to be checking their locks...
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Date: 2011-05-16 09:32 pm (UTC)<333
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:08 am (UTC)And no Ed has never been that 'truly' observant of Al
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Date: 2011-05-16 11:43 pm (UTC)*impatiently waits for the coming explosion*
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:09 am (UTC)...and yes the explosion is coming and what a show it will be.
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Date: 2011-05-26 02:50 am (UTC)Yay!
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Date: 2011-05-17 01:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-05-24 01:10 am (UTC)You shouldn't be alone...everyone should fear Al now.
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Date: 2011-05-17 01:47 am (UTC)He can’t have you Brother, even if it’s painfully clear now that you want nothing more than to be taken. *shudders, is filled with an immense sense of dread and foreboding* :(
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:11 am (UTC)*hides with you*
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Date: 2011-05-17 08:43 am (UTC)But I am afraid for Roy now. I am terrified of what Al's going to do. Even if it's Ed breaking it off with him so his brother's not upset. >.
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:13 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-05-18 04:24 am (UTC)My Poor Al... *pets him fondly*
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:15 am (UTC)He is making a greater villain than I ever dared dream.
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Date: 2011-05-18 11:38 am (UTC)I love how you build up the tension over these short chapters - I'm so on edge from so few words. Truly brilliant writing.
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Date: 2011-05-18 10:48 pm (UTC)Its inspired by this lovely little Al you've planted inside my head!!
Hope you like it... here's the link:
http://hpfangirl71.livejournal.com/79225.html#cutid1
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-05-20 05:41 am (UTC)Poor Al ;_____; you deserve your brother but you can't help him from being so naive u_u
Go kill someone! :D
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Date: 2011-05-24 01:21 am (UTC)Al will surprise us all.
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Date: 2011-05-29 09:21 am (UTC)