Invidia: XIII
May. 6th, 2011 07:47 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Title: Invidia: XIII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
lynx212
Words: 298
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al doesn't like to see his precious Ed upset... but it can't be avoided, some sacrifices have to be made
Random Quote: “The two most powerful warriors are patience and time.” ~Leo Nikolaevich Tolstoy
Brother is upset and as much as I hate to see that it’s necessary.
What I can’t believe is the fact that even after all of this you can’t see how undeniably flawed your lover is. He doesn’t deserve you worrying over him, fussing over him just like he doesn’t deserve your love. Why you insist on giving him these precious things you deny me Brother I’ll never know but I will prove to you soon that I am the only person you should want and the only person you need.
As you worry yourself into another fitful sleep on the couch I readjust you so your head is in my lap. You are whimpering as you slumber and the fact it is over him strikes an ill chord with me.
I watch you sleep for over an hour and when you mumble his name and clutch at my pants leg like you are missing part of your soul I can take no more. I hop to my feet causing your head to drop to the couch hard enough to wake you.
You sit up sleepily, rubbing your eyes and ask me what’s wrong. I’m so angry I lose my cool for just a moment and the look I give you startles you and your sleepiness fades instantly. You call my name so timidly it pulls at my heart and relaxes my features.
I assure you that nothing is wrong and that it is only my own worry over your exhausted state that has me off kilter. This calms you and when you settle back down I pull a blanket over you and turn off the lights.
It won’t be much longer now, but I can wait.
It’s been over a decade now… what’s a few more weeks?
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
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Words: 298
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al doesn't like to see his precious Ed upset... but it can't be avoided, some sacrifices have to be made
Random Quote: “The two most powerful warriors are patience and time.” ~Leo Nikolaevich Tolstoy
Brother is upset and as much as I hate to see that it’s necessary.
What I can’t believe is the fact that even after all of this you can’t see how undeniably flawed your lover is. He doesn’t deserve you worrying over him, fussing over him just like he doesn’t deserve your love. Why you insist on giving him these precious things you deny me Brother I’ll never know but I will prove to you soon that I am the only person you should want and the only person you need.
As you worry yourself into another fitful sleep on the couch I readjust you so your head is in my lap. You are whimpering as you slumber and the fact it is over him strikes an ill chord with me.
I watch you sleep for over an hour and when you mumble his name and clutch at my pants leg like you are missing part of your soul I can take no more. I hop to my feet causing your head to drop to the couch hard enough to wake you.
You sit up sleepily, rubbing your eyes and ask me what’s wrong. I’m so angry I lose my cool for just a moment and the look I give you startles you and your sleepiness fades instantly. You call my name so timidly it pulls at my heart and relaxes my features.
I assure you that nothing is wrong and that it is only my own worry over your exhausted state that has me off kilter. This calms you and when you settle back down I pull a blanket over you and turn off the lights.
It won’t be much longer now, but I can wait.
It’s been over a decade now… what’s a few more weeks?
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Date: 2011-05-07 01:06 am (UTC)I think your creepy Al is starting to become a permanent idea in my head, all the nice Al's that live up there are starting to show their dark sides :P <33
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Date: 2011-05-13 09:58 pm (UTC)I would love to see some of your take on creepy Al
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Date: 2011-05-07 01:17 am (UTC)*shivers* Uh-oh. Somehow things just a little more dangerous. Al has a deadline, hopefully not a literal one. :[ His craziness will surely be ramping up now. *whimpers* Be afraid my beloved OTP, be very afraid. :(
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Date: 2011-05-07 05:16 am (UTC)I love the image of the two boys on the couch, Ed's head in Al's lap and Al lovingly stroking his blonde hair while he sleeps, peaceably unaware... its quite lovely my dear!! :D
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Date: 2011-05-14 12:37 am (UTC)I cant wait to see what he has in store for the loving couple... *grins mischievously in anticipation*
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Date: 2011-05-08 07:59 pm (UTC)::shivers and eagerly waits for next chapter::
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Date: 2011-05-14 08:51 pm (UTC)Will we get a chapter under Ed's POV? I can't help but wonder if he's noticed the change in Al. He must right? Especially after Al gave him such an uncharacteristic look just for asking what was bothering him.
There should be more stories with an evil manipulative, sick Al. I'm loving it...and sorta not loving it at the same time. Its a confusing relationship.
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Date: 2011-05-18 02:22 am (UTC)As for Ed he loves his little brother plain and simple. Just like when Al was in the armor Ed's treatment of him did not change...he just can't see it but much like all of us... we only see what we want to see...
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Date: 2011-05-18 01:30 am (UTC)I don't like Roy suffering either but, as Al says, it's necessary ;p
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