lynx212: (Al Devious)
[personal profile] lynx212
Title: Invidia: XIII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[livejournal.com profile] lynx212 
Words: 298
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al doesn't like to see his precious Ed upset... but it can't be avoided, some sacrifices have to be made 
Random Quote: “The two most powerful warriors are patience and time.”  ~Leo Nikolaevich Tolstoy


Brother is upset and as much as I hate to see that it’s necessary.

What I can’t believe is the fact that even after all of this you can’t see how undeniably flawed your lover is. He doesn’t deserve you worrying over him, fussing over him just like he doesn’t deserve your love. Why you insist on giving him these precious things you deny me Brother I’ll never know but I will prove to you soon that I am the only person you should want and the only person you need.

As you worry yourself into another fitful sleep on the couch I readjust you so your head is in my lap. You are whimpering as you slumber and the fact it is over him strikes an ill chord with me.

I watch you sleep for over an hour and when you mumble his name and clutch at my pants leg like you are missing part of your soul I can take no more. I hop to my feet causing your head to drop to the couch hard enough to wake you.

You sit up sleepily, rubbing your eyes and ask me what’s wrong. I’m so angry I lose my cool for just a moment and the look I give you startles you and your sleepiness fades instantly. You call my name so timidly it pulls at my heart and relaxes my features.

I assure you that nothing is wrong and that it is only my own worry over your exhausted state that has me off kilter. This calms you and when you settle back down I pull a blanket over you and turn off the lights.

It won’t be much longer now, but I can wait.

It’s been over a decade now… what’s a few more weeks?

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Date: 2011-05-07 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
Ah, creepy Al, how I love thee.

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Date: 2011-05-13 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*hugs* I love you too chic a dee

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Date: 2011-05-13 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
*hugs back*

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Date: 2011-05-07 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sonjajade.livejournal.com
HOLY CRAP!!! Al's really starting to scare me....

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Date: 2011-05-13 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear Al being scary is my goal ;o)

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Date: 2011-05-07 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
He's cracking and I'm pretty sure that's not a good thing.

I think your creepy Al is starting to become a permanent idea in my head, all the nice Al's that live up there are starting to show their dark sides :P <33

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Date: 2011-05-13 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Yes he is cracking and it won't be pretty once he breaks...

I would love to see some of your take on creepy Al

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Date: 2011-05-07 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com
Uh oh. Messed-up-in-the-head Al has a messed-up-in-the-head plan. O-o

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Date: 2011-05-13 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Indeed he is he is more messed up than even I know yet...

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Date: 2011-05-07 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
Al just gets more and more brilliantly creepy...

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Date: 2011-05-13 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear *hugs on you*

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Date: 2011-05-07 01:17 am (UTC)
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)
From: [personal profile] amethyst_koneko
It's been five years now...what's a few more weeks?

*shivers* Uh-oh. Somehow things just a little more dangerous. Al has a deadline, hopefully not a literal one. :[ His craziness will surely be ramping up now. *whimpers* Be afraid my beloved OTP, be very afraid. :(

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Yes they need to be afraid because Al is a ticking time bomb and the explosion is bound to be spectacular..

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Date: 2011-05-07 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com
It seems like Al is barely able to control himself now. I'm sure it won't be much longer for his final plan. Poor Ed, being so clueless.

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Yes poor Ed still sees the loving little brother he's always known...he has no idea...none
Edited Date: 2011-05-13 10:03 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2011-05-07 02:16 am (UTC)
vexed_wench: (ed/al)
From: [personal profile] vexed_wench
this made my night. I love creepy!Al.

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
YAY glad it made your night *hugs*

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Date: 2011-05-07 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com
*shudder* Oh Al... (I love [livejournal.com profile] ca11iope's comment...seems to sum the situation up entirely. :D

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
That it did Al is more messed up than we could ever imagine

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Date: 2011-05-07 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
Ooooh... what does my darling Al have in mind??

I love the image of the two boys on the couch, Ed's head in Al's lap and Al lovingly stroking his blonde hair while he sleeps, peaceably unaware... its quite lovely my dear!! :D
Edited Date: 2011-05-07 05:17 am (UTC)

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*luffs on you* Thank you chic a dee Al is so perfect for this he is the type that everyone would suspect last and well by the time it becomes obvious...

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Date: 2011-05-14 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
Oh yes... that is for sure... who would suspect shy, sweet, and loving little ole Al?? LOL

I cant wait to see what he has in store for the loving couple... *grins mischievously in anticipation*

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Date: 2011-05-08 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com
You KNOW the writing's first rate when you read this and catch yourself whispering, "Al...please...please don't do it..."
::shivers and eagerly waits for next chapter::

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Date: 2011-05-13 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*hugs on you hard and blushes* Thank you so much for the praise my dear. Unfortunately no matter how hard we plead with Al his plan is set in motion and there is no stopping him now.

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Date: 2011-05-14 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] withsweet-words.livejournal.com
Al's so far gone he cant even see Ed would never, under any circumstances, be with him in the way he wants.

Will we get a chapter under Ed's POV? I can't help but wonder if he's noticed the change in Al. He must right? Especially after Al gave him such an uncharacteristic look just for asking what was bothering him.

There should be more stories with an evil manipulative, sick Al. I'm loving it...and sorta not loving it at the same time. Its a confusing relationship.

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Date: 2011-05-18 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! *hugs* and yes more from Ed's POV is coming up soon. Sick/twisted Al is growing on me too and I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to where this will lead.

As for Ed he loves his little brother plain and simple. Just like when Al was in the armor Ed's treatment of him did not change...he just can't see it but much like all of us... we only see what we want to see...

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Date: 2011-05-18 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natekeehl.livejournal.com
I suffer seeinng Al suffer u_u
I don't like Roy suffering either but, as Al says, it's necessary ;p

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Date: 2011-05-18 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Al is on the brink of insanity and unfortunately someone is going to piss him off...

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