Invidia: X and XI
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lynx212For those of you on my late night F-List I bring you two parts of Invida well before anyone else knows it's out...heh heh heh *love you all* I will get to more replying tomorrow *massive hugs and well wishes* You guys and gals have kept me sane more days than you could ever know...
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
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lynx212 Words: 258
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al is putting his plan into action and as far as he is concerned, nothing and no one is in his way...
Random Quote: “When nobody will look at you, you can stare a hole in them. Picking out all the little details you'd never stare long enough to get if she'd ever just return your gaze, this, this is your revenge.” ~Michellee Chuck Palahniuk
Weeks passed and I’ve spent the last two of them tracking you. It’s no wonder you have people like Riza and Breda on your team. For such a revered solider you are laughably predictable. You eat lunch with Maes every Thursday at this open air café just as you stop every Monday afternoon to buy Xingian style food from a street vendor on your way home. I’m sitting three tables away from you and Hughes and you don’t even know I’m here.
If I were a sniper you would have been dead long ago. But a quick demise is not what you deserve.
You need to suffer as I have before you go.
You plan on taking my Brother away again but this time for a whole week and I can’t allow that. I can’t be gone that long to look after him while he’s in your supposed care. Besides, you don’t deserve that much time alone with him. You taint him enough on a daily basis. A whole week with no other influence outside of you may render him unrecognizable to me.
I don’t know why he can’t see that you’re destroying him, changing him and making him into someone he doesn’t need to become. He is above you Roy Mustang and you have placed him below you and I cannot let this continue.
The waiter is at your table, the two of you place your orders and I have seen enough. I have one thing left to do before I leave you to your little lunch.
Title: Invidia: XI
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
lynx212 Words: 300
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Roy knew the situation was bad but he never once saw it coming...
Random Quote: “If you ever catch on fire, try to avoid seeing yourself in the mirror, because I bet that's what REALLY throws you into a panic.” ~ Jack Handy
I’m talking to Maes sitting at our usual spot at Lydia’s. The conversation is lighter than it’s been in a long time and I welcome the change. He asks me about my upcoming plans with Ed and I tell him that I’ve planned the perfect week for us. I’m looking forward to a week of no work, no stress and especially no Al. If looks could kill I would have died a thousand miserable deaths already.
I haven’t even told Ed where we are going hoping to make it a surprise. In truth I think I’m more excited than he is. It’s been a great eight months of relationship bliss and I know it seems sudden but I’ve decided if he’ll let me, I’m keeping him forever. That’s the purpose behind the trip I’m popping the question and Maes is the only one that knows this.
He’s asking me if I’m nervous and I give him a look. Of course I’m nervous. As great as it’s been this is still Ed I’m dealing with and there’s a good chance he may shove the ring I bought him somewhere that will require surgery to have it removed. When I tell Maes this he laughs at me and asks to see it.
The waiter comes before I can pull it out, we place our orders and I fish the box out of my pocket. When Maes opens it he lets out a whistle but then asks why there are two.
I told him no way is Ed wearing something that marks him as taken without me doing the same.
Our sandwiches come and I take one bite and I know. I seize up and Maes asks me what’s wrong.
Tomato is all I can choke out before my mouth starts to swell.
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Date: 2011-04-28 11:16 am (UTC):;keeps reminding self 'it's fiction...right??::
Al....you're got me REALLY scared now....
(sign of damn good writing!!!)
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Date: 2011-05-01 05:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-28 12:22 pm (UTC)You write the best dark characters my dear <33
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Date: 2011-05-01 05:59 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-28 02:14 pm (UTC)Wow.
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Date: 2011-05-01 08:19 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-28 06:13 pm (UTC)I know... its utterly pathetic that I'm rooting for the bad guy, isn't it?? LOL
I can't help it... its Al, he deserves Ed way more than Roy does!! Cant wait for more dearie!! ;P
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Date: 2011-04-29 12:21 am (UTC)I shall be here, waiting for more like a greedy little piglet.
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Date: 2011-05-01 08:26 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-04-29 01:35 am (UTC)As always, I look forward to more even tho I'm almost afraid to know what happens next! :)
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Date: 2011-05-01 08:34 pm (UTC)Al is growing angrier and more impatient, for him and everyone else involved this is a really bad mix
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Date: 2011-04-29 04:04 am (UTC)Mmm, creepy Al, you strike again. Well done!
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Date: 2011-05-01 08:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-29 11:22 am (UTC)I'm so glad he's not like this in canon. *shivers*
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Date: 2011-05-01 08:38 pm (UTC)icon love
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Date: 2011-05-05 04:05 am (UTC)...only because I dont have a choice, lol!
<3
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Date: 2011-05-07 01:15 pm (UTC)I agree with you about the ultra sweet people there are usually up to something and once it becomes known...world watch out!
Next part is up my dear ^_^
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Date: 2011-05-18 01:25 am (UTC)I just love how his mind works... anticipating every movement his enemy takes~ ;D
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Date: 2011-05-18 02:10 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-10-18 10:47 pm (UTC)Al is so deliciously creepy in this story! I LOVE it! (And fear it, lol.)
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