lynx212: (Roy Thoughful)
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Title: Invidia: IX
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[info]lynx212 
Words: 300
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Roy is concerned enough about Al's behavior to confide in someone...
Random Quote: “When I saw you, I was afraid to meet you... When I met you, I was afraid to kiss you... When I kissed you, I was afraid to love you... Now that I love you, I'm afraid to lose you.”
 
Previous Parts: I  II   III   IV  V  VI  VII  VIII
 
  
It’s Tuesday and I’m having lunch with Ed, Al and Maes. I have expressed some of my concerns to Maes and he decided he would use that investigative eye of his on Al. He was hesitant to even hear me out at first but apparently something in my voice told him I was dead serious.

All through lunch Hughes was as jovial and talkative as ever and I feared that he had forgotten why I asked him to lunch to begin with. The brothers left together and the moment they were out of earshot the easy going look on my best friends face morphed into some look I couldn't define.

Those green eyes were serious when he told me that Al was on guard the entire time he sat with us. I asked him how he knew and he said that you don’t spend as many years as he has in investigations and not be able to spot facial tension and carefully chosen words. He said Al’s entire demeanor was nothing but a well practiced sham.

When he asked me what I thought Al’s issue was I hesitated. I didn’t want to lie to Maes but I didn’t have the words to tell him what I really thought either. He loves those two young men like sons and that left me short on explanations.

Maes called me out on my hesitation so I had to come clean and his response to that wasn’t favorable at all. He told me that was a heavy and twisted accusation. When I agreed he just looked at me for a long time, searching my eyes for something he apparently found.

He left me with a promise to look into it and nothing more.

I hope I didn’t just lose my best friend over this.

 

 

 

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Date: 2011-04-24 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com
You've go an amazing talent for this, completely creeping me out with a few well chosen words. I thought with Maes involved, things might be looking up, but instead, it's only getting worse. Now I realize that there's no happy waiting in the wings. The train wreck continues. And I can hardly wait for the next piece. *sadly hums Locomotive Breath*

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear *kisses hand* I am still hoping I can keep up the creepy vibe in this (I adore my unhinged Al)He makes the perfect psycho... no one looks at the quiet "seemingly" sweet ones... I shall try to get the next part up tonight *hugs more*

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Date: 2011-04-24 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
Maes has to see that Roy's worried. I can't wait to see what Maes finds out :)

<3333

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Maes is an amazing character that I can't help but use every chance I get. He will do so digging and well...things will get interesting.

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Date: 2011-04-25 12:42 am (UTC)
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)
From: [personal profile] amethyst_koneko
*takes a deep breath* I feel like I can breathe again now that I know that Roy isn't completely alone in this. He's definitely going to need an ally for the shitstorm I fear is coming. Al is good at hiding things but he won't be able to for much longer. There's no getting away from Maes' keen eye! :) I'm curious and slightly afraid to know what Maes finds out!

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Maes is such a good friend to Roy that even if he was in doubt I think he is the sort to still consider anything Roy said...

As for what he finds out... well you will just have to keep reading *hugs on you*

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Date: 2011-04-25 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com
Of course Maes would know what's what! I love how you wrote this one, especially the characterisation for Maes. He is made of much awesome.

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*hugs on you* Thank you so much!! I too think Maes is made of awesome. He is so sweet but that is not all there is to Maes he is a dangerous man that is not to be trifled with...

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Date: 2011-04-25 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
Ooooooooooooooooo!

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* glad I still have you intrigued my dear!

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Date: 2011-04-25 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] withsweet-words.livejournal.com
Normally I cant stand short chapters like this, but it really fits the style of the story!

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* thank you for the praise!! I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment love ^_^

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Date: 2011-04-25 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com
I am loving this more and more! It's so deliciously dark and ominous :D I love the addition of Hughes and that he is reluctant to believe anything bad about Al.

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you chic a dee. I think Maes is the sort to never be quick to assume anything like that even from the most trusted of sources... and he loves Ed and Al that had to be rough

icon love btw

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Date: 2011-04-25 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dailybee.livejournal.com
Oooo Maes is on the case!

Shit is going down!

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
LOL indeed it will be and this is only the beginning...

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Date: 2011-04-25 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
Damn!! I was hoping he wouldn't believe him in the first place but hopefully he won't believe his whole story!! If Ed weren't so oblivious then poor Al wouldn't be in this situation!! Back off Roy... Like I said... Back the *F* off!! LOL

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
You are a trip little lady! You don't dont care that Al is loco you just want him smexing Ed *hugs*

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Date: 2011-04-27 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
Hey, Al wouldn't be so crazy if it weren't for Roy in the picture... and its your fault I totally ship Elricest in this fandom!! LOL

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Date: 2011-04-25 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
ooooo, Now Maes is involved. It just got even more interesting.

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you little lady anything involving Maes is a good deal...lol

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Date: 2011-04-28 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
You're welcome. Yes. ^_^

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Date: 2011-05-02 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
Uh oh... that's what got him killed in the anime, digging for the truth... :-/

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Date: 2011-05-18 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Indeed it was my dear...but Maes doesn't know how to let a mystery go unsolved.

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Date: 2011-05-18 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natekeehl.livejournal.com
omg I love you for putting Maes on this!! ;A;

Aww Al is turning everyone against Roy ;D *cheers up*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-05-18 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Al is a devious little minx in this he is so twisted on the inside it's scary...

And who else but Maes to solve a mystery my dear...lol glad you liked it and thanks for the comment love. *hugs*

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