lynx212: (Al Devious)
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Title: Invidia: VIII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[info]lynx212 
Words: 297
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al is disappointed once again by his brother's actions an he wonders why Ed can't see what Roy really is?
Random Quote:  “The sudden disappointment of a hope leaves a scar which the ultimate fulfillment of that hope never entirely removes.” ~Thomas Hardy


Last night wasn’t what you were hoping for was it Brother?

Can’t you see how weak he is and how he lets that weakness rule him? You had a beautiful four poster bed you should have slept in but instead you spent the night curled up around his sniveling ass on the couch. But again that is something you probably didn’t mind as you seem to be happy as a lark now walking around town with him looking at senseless things on your way to the train station.

When we get back to Central the two of you head in the direction of his place and I head home. When you finally arrive hours later your hair isn’t in the braid you had it in when you got off the train so I can only imagine you spent the time letting him defile you once more.

You ask me how my weekend was and I tell you I spent it bird watching. You ask me when I took that up as a hobby and I tell you it’s new. Curious, you ask me question after question. I tell you about the two birds I kept an eye on for most of the weekend and when you ask me if I could show you their nest sometime it was hard not to laugh.

When you retire to your room for the night I follow you and begrudgingly ask you about your trip. That sun bright smile returns to your face as you tell me all about it. It made my stomach churn and it was difficult to listen too. At least I enjoyed the part about Roy not resting well but I wasn’t foolish enough to let that show.

You’ve been foolish enough for the both of us.

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Date: 2011-04-16 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com
I'm almost afraid to find out how Al will finally take action. It's bound to be cold and ruthless.

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Date: 2011-04-17 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
I do believe you are correct my dear. It won't be pretty

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Date: 2011-04-16 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
You really have me on the edge of my seat <3

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Date: 2011-04-17 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear so glad you continue to follow this ^_^

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Date: 2011-04-17 03:11 am (UTC)
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)
From: [personal profile] amethyst_koneko
I agree with ca11iope. When Al finally snaps, it's not gonna be pretty. I foresee much (emotional? physical? both?) devastation ahead. :(

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Date: 2011-04-17 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
When he snaps the fallout will be epic indeed he is not a well man...

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Date: 2011-04-17 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com
I am eagerly anticipating what Al will do next ;)

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Date: 2011-04-17 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear I hope I do not disappoint. *hugs*

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Date: 2011-04-17 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
*hides behind chair*

I have a horrible feeling about how this is going to turn out.

LOVING this series.

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Date: 2011-04-17 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thanks for reading babe it won't be long until the next part is up.

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Date: 2011-04-18 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
oooo...Creepy Al is creepy. I'm loving this and can't wait for the next part!

Btw, your random quotes are rather epic.

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Date: 2011-04-23 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thanks my dear for continuing to read and I really didn't think anyone noticed the quotes ^_^

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Date: 2011-04-23 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
You're welcome! LOL. I'm an avid quote collector, can't help myself.

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Date: 2011-04-19 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com
*singsong* Al's gonna sna~p, Al's gonna sna~p...now it's just a matter of seeing how.... (You're making me itch to write a crazy Al piece.)

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Date: 2011-04-23 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Yes indeed Al is gonna snap (loves your sing-song) I say go for it!! The fanfic world need more crazy Al!!

volunteers to beta this for you if you do...

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Date: 2011-04-24 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com
*grins* I couldn't agree more. It's really more of a teaser, but I posted it in my main journal to see what people would think of it first before I put it out there. You're more than welcome to beta it...feel free to give me your thoughts too and let me know if you think it's Elricest comm-worthy.

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Date: 2011-04-25 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
I am totally loving evil stalker Al!! This is an amazing fic sweetie!!

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Date: 2011-04-27 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*blushes hard* Thank you my dear you have been great!! *hugs*

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