Invidia: VI

[lynx212]

Title: Invidia: VI
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author: lynx212 
Words: 298
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al's not one to be left behind...he can't look after Ed unless he's with him....
Random Quote: “It turns out that an eerie type of chaos can lurk just behind a facade of order - and yet, deep inside the chaos lurks an even eerier type of order” ~Douglas Hostadter

Well isn’t this a cozy little spot he’s taken Brother to.

I didn’t picture you the type to go for lilies and lace Brother. Is this really what you wanted from me? Is this what I failed to provide? To treat you like some spoiled bitch? That seems to be the case as I watch you move from room to room in this cabin he’s procured for your little vacation. The smile on your face gets bigger and bigger the more you look around and it makes my stomach turn.

I can’t hear you but I know you are happy because your face is lit up like the sun. You throw your arms around his neck and kiss him as if it’s something you haven’t done in years. I was sitting several cars behind where the two of you were seated so I couldn’t see you but I’m sure you did it on the train just as you did when you got off and before the two of you checked in to get your cabin keys.

Already his unworthy hands are moving down your back and under your shirt. It makes me want to pull everyone of his fingers out one by one. As I watch you unbuttoning his shirt I realize he’s made you as shameless as he is. I’m surprised you didn’t just rip it off him because I can see the urgency in your movements from here.

Unwilling to watch anymore I move around the small building and I’m pleased to find almost every room has a window. This will make keeping an eye on you much easier while you’re away. You never were any good at reading people Brother.

He’s no good for you and I’ll show you that when the time is right.

Comments

[binaryalchemist.livejournal.com]

"He’s no good for you and I’ll show you that when the time is right."

::shiver::

Al...I hate to admit it...but it's delightful seeing your dark side for once...you have REALLY got me biting my nails now...

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*heh heh* thank you my dear I have enjoyed exploring a not so "sun shiny" Alphonse. *luffs on you*

[nochick-fics.livejournal.com]

Oh stalker!Al. I probably shouldn't like your creepiness, but I do.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Nothing wrong with that my dear but think about it...considering what they have lived through I think both Elric's are prime candidates for becoming sociopaths.

[amethyst_koneko]

*shivers* I don't have any witty analogies for this one. Al has scared them right out of me! "He's no good for you and I'll show you that when the time is right." *eeps and hides!* That means Al's gonna sit right there and watch them doing whatever whenever and however the mood strikes them! (Knowing Roy, Al's gonna catch an eyefull that's for sure!) Stalker!Al is giving me goosebumps! ^_^

[amethyst_koneko]

Holy crap! I forgot to mention that Al called Ed a bitch! O_O! Holy crap! Has it come to this? Al is so twisted that he's cursing that which he proclaims to love? The boy is sicker than I thought. :( Why does the line, "If I can't have you no one will", keep running thru my head? *is filled with much dread now*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

I am glad someone picked up on that...in his twisted little world Al is losing the respect he's always had for Ed. His mind is losing it's tenuous grip on reality and he's only seeing what he want's to see and what he want's to see isn't a pretty picture...

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Yes Al is a little off to the left in this...he has no clue that he has issues but boy does he ever have them. He wants Ed all to himself and Roy out of the way and he won't stop until that happens...

[vexed_wench]

Creepy Al is Creepy...:)

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Yes he is and he' only just begun...

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

*Squee* I like where this is going.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*heh heh* thank you little lady *hugs on you*

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. *hugs back*

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

Yikes, this is a terrifying chapter! SO well done.

*shivers*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thank you my dear Al is working himself into a frenzy with his "interesting" thoughts....

[ca11iope.livejournal.com]

Boy, it's like watching a train wreck in slow motion. You know it's going to be bad, but you can't help looking.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Very good analogy for this my dear and I concur!

[kettle-cat.livejournal.com]

Ah, I still love it <3 Thanks for fast updates ^^

On a (little) unrelated note: Normally I don't get flustered when I'm reading fics, but I'm at Uni now and I can't stop blushing ;)

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Awww thanks for the support chic a dee My muse is all over this one and loving a darker take on Al.

[natekeehl.livejournal.com]

omg I'm really picturing Al putting up a deadly trap for Roy D: ...

go for it!! :D

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Oh Roy is so in for it...he has no idea Al is not to be trifled with...

[baroqueangel.livejournal.com]

Al is seriously creeping me out right now, you're doing an amazing job of portraying his insanity <33

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you my dear. I hope I continue to get across just how unstable he is as this progresses...

[havemy-heart.livejournal.com]

You show him, Al! *loves on her Al*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL thanks chic a dee I am loving this Al too ^_^

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, only our Al is good enough for our Ed!!

Just wait till you get yours Roy... If Al doesn't get you then us crazy fangirls will... *nods vigorously*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL there is a long hard road ahead of Roy and Ed in this...I think Al will surprise everyone...