lynx212: (Al Serious)
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Title: Invidia IV
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[info]lynx212 
Words: 297
Rating: T
Summary: Al doesn't like Roy's influence over Ed he just wants what's best for him and what's best for Ed isn't Roy.
Warnings: It's getting darker in here....
 


It was so hard for me to smile as I listened to Brother carry on about his weekend plans with him. He’s such a lost little soul and when I think about it, he’s never really known what’s good for him. Forever searching for something, he just can’t seem to find. I’ve tried to keep him safe, I truly have, but I feel as if I failed him somehow for this to be happening.

He had to be starved for something I wasn’t giving him to turn to, Mustang.

I would like to know what lies Roy feeds him when I’m not around. It has to be something for him to be this excited over a mere road trip. It’s not like we’ve never traveled and their destination is not even to someplace he’s never been.

That alone is suspicious.

He asks me if I need the bathroom and when I say no he gathers up clean under clothes and a towel. When he disappears into the bathroom, I wait my usual six minutes before following him.

I ease the door open just a hair and even through the textured glass of the shower door I can tell the water is raining down upon perfection. Tanned, muscular, golden perfection. I never thought I would envy water but as I listen to it caressing him in ways I can’t, in ways he won’t let me, I… I…

The water turns off and I slip away from the door. I am down the hall when he strolls out of the bathroom, still damp and wearing nothing but his boxers. He smiles at me when he passes making my fingers twitch and my pants grow tight.

It takes all of what remains of my fading resolve not to touch him.


 

 

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Date: 2011-04-10 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com
OMG Lynx... this is sooooo goooood.

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Date: 2011-04-10 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
LOL thanks my dear *hugs on you* I hope I can pull this off. Thanks for all the comment love babe *molests you*

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Date: 2011-04-10 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com
::BITES LIP:: oHHHH...THE TENSION....you've got me hanging on tenterhooks....will Al...or won't he??
::fans self and waits impatiently for update::

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Date: 2011-04-10 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
It's hard to tell where Al is going to take this obsession but I will try not to make you wait too long *luffs on*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-10 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kettle-cat.livejournal.com
Aww I love this series so much, I can't wait for the next part! The tension there is D:

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Date: 2011-04-10 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*loves on you* I am glad to hear the tension is coming through on this. Glad you are liking it and thanks for the support ^_^

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-10 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com
Oh my God, you made the hair go up on the back of my neck! *shivers*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-10 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*heh heh* thanks babe I am new at darkfic so glad to know it's coming across as eerie as I intended it to

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-10 11:39 pm (UTC)
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)
From: [personal profile] amethyst_koneko
Oh jeez! Oh jeez, oh jeez, oh jeez! This is like watching a shark circle ever closer to an unsuspecting seal! Swim faster little seal! There's a deranged lunatic eyeballing you up for lunch! *whimpers and hides!*

Oh man, I'm afraid this isn't going to end well for somebody. Who pays the biggest price here I'm not sure but this definitely isn't going to end well. :( In my mind I keep seeing Roy having to singe Al a little bit to make him back down but if it came down to a battle between them I honestly don't know who would win....and that scares me even more. :(

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-12 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
This is like watching a shark circle ever closer to an unsuspecting seal!

Great analogy babe! I am so glad you are enjoying this chic a dee I love getting your input on my writing *hugs on you*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-16 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
And the showdown promises to be epic I just hope I can execute it properly with words...

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-10 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com
Al just keeps getting creepier each time you write. I'm loving his warped ideas <33

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Date: 2011-04-12 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear *kisses hand* I am hoping I can pull this off as creepy as I want it to be...

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Date: 2011-04-11 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com
Oh wow...this is so devastating. The psychology is bang on. Al has no idea what he's doing wrong, has he? How creepy he is? But I still feel sorry for him!

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Date: 2011-04-12 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
YAY thank you so much for saying that! *hugs on you hard* I was really worried about the psychology of Al's twisted ideals and issues being off or not coming through.

And yes Al is clueless that what he's doing is wrong and that his thinking is way skewed...
Edited Date: 2011-04-12 02:01 am (UTC)

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Date: 2011-04-11 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
WOW. You have created such wonderful tension. I really am loving every bit of this.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-12 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*squees*

I appreciate all of the support you've given with this and my other fics chic a dee *hugs on you hard*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-13 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com
You're welcome! *hugs you back*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-12 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com
This keeps getting better and better :D

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Date: 2011-04-12 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Thanks little lady *hugs* I hope I don't disappoint as this goes along.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-12 05:51 pm (UTC)
vexed_wench: (Default)
From: [personal profile] vexed_wench
Poor Roy *sniffles*

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-16 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Yeah poor Roy is in for it and he has no idea whatsoever...

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-13 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natekeehl.livejournal.com
asdf I love you for keeping up with this ;A;

come on Al! I encourage you to touch your brother, he'll like it, really <3

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-16 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
*giggles* You are more than welcome thank you for reading and commenting *hugs*

Al has a plan for Ed...

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-15 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com
That part was amazing!! And to think Ed doesn't even realize the affect he's having on poor Al...

(no subject)

Date: 2011-04-16 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Oblivious Ed is oblivious right?

Poor Edo his little world is abut to get tipped on its ear

(no subject)

Date: 2013-05-27 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zachemja.livejournal.com
Usual 6 minutes, shit Al, creepy!

(no subject)

Date: 2013-05-27 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com
Very... Al has been working to redefine creepy.

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