FMA: Invidia (part two)
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lynx212Title: Invidia (part two of ?)
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
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lynx212
Words: 300
Rating: T
Summary: Al watches Ed and he just doesn't understand...he doesn't understand why Ed can't see him.
Warnings: it's getting darker in here....
I don’t know how Brother ended up with Mustang of all people. He hated him right? It’s not logical to go from loathing someone to loving them. It’s not the natural order of things.
As I watch him getting ready for bed I see a mark on his collarbone. Against my will I envision Roy’s unworthy lips pressed to Brother’s sensitive flesh and it turns my stomach. He’s prattling on about Roy this and Roy that and if I didn’t love him so much I would smack the beautiful lips that wretched name is tumbling out of.
Can’t you see, I want to scream, can’t you see me at all?
Of course not Brother, of course you can’t, I am now as I’ve always been and that’s background noise isn’t it? I fix your breakfast, just the way you like it every morning. One egg over easy and one scrambled because you can never make up your mind which you’d rather have.
I keep the house in order, I organize your notes and I keep track of when you need to be where for work. I even wash your clothes despite the fact that the smell of that man is more prominent on the fabric than your own scent.
Does he drape himself over you all day dear Brother? He must because I can’t imagine how else the two of you mange this.
You unbraid your hair and when it falls loose and wavy down your back I run my fingers through it and you look at me funny. It’s insulting. He can be all over you but that one small gesture from me earns a look.
But that will all change soon, won’t it? You may be upset for a bit, but trust me Brother…
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author:
lynx212 Words: 300
Rating: T
Summary: Al watches Ed and he just doesn't understand...he doesn't understand why Ed can't see him.
Warnings: it's getting darker in here....
As I watch him getting ready for bed I see a mark on his collarbone. Against my will I envision Roy’s unworthy lips pressed to Brother’s sensitive flesh and it turns my stomach. He’s prattling on about Roy this and Roy that and if I didn’t love him so much I would smack the beautiful lips that wretched name is tumbling out of.
Can’t you see, I want to scream, can’t you see me at all?
Of course not Brother, of course you can’t, I am now as I’ve always been and that’s background noise isn’t it? I fix your breakfast, just the way you like it every morning. One egg over easy and one scrambled because you can never make up your mind which you’d rather have.
I keep the house in order, I organize your notes and I keep track of when you need to be where for work. I even wash your clothes despite the fact that the smell of that man is more prominent on the fabric than your own scent.
Does he drape himself over you all day dear Brother? He must because I can’t imagine how else the two of you mange this.
You unbraid your hair and when it falls loose and wavy down your back I run my fingers through it and you look at me funny. It’s insulting. He can be all over you but that one small gesture from me earns a look.
But that will all change soon, won’t it? You may be upset for a bit, but trust me Brother…
It’s for the best.
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Date: 2011-04-07 11:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-08 12:57 am (UTC)“The scattered tea goes with the leaves and every day a sunset dies.” ~William Faulkner
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Date: 2011-04-07 12:57 pm (UTC)That line Can’t you see, I want to scream, can’t you see me at all? is so well done. Such a howl of pain.
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:09 am (UTC)I was cut off from the world. There was no one to confuse or torment me, and I was forced to become original.
~Joseph Haydn
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Date: 2011-04-07 05:00 pm (UTC)You unbraid your hair and when it falls loose and wavy down your back I run my fingers through it and you look at me funny. It’s insulting. He can be all over you but that one small gesture from me earns a look.
Aw, poor obsessed!Al. I will cuddle him and help him plot against Roy *innocent face*
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:12 am (UTC)“Passion is a positive obsession. Obsession is a negative passion.” ~Paul Carvel
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Date: 2011-04-07 08:09 pm (UTC)I like how you portrayed Al- after all he's a human too.
I really can't wait for more^^
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:15 am (UTC)“The problem with people is that they're only human.” ~Bill Watterson
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Date: 2011-04-07 10:04 pm (UTC)<33
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:22 am (UTC)The creative impulses of man are always at war with the possessive impulses. ~Van Wyck Brooks
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Date: 2011-04-07 11:49 pm (UTC)Whoa.
I'm loving this dark side of Al. Update soon!
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:28 am (UTC)“Every one is a moon, and has a dark side which he never shows to anybody” ~Mark Twain
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:43 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-04-08 12:24 am (UTC)It's so nice to see Al with a darkside.
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:30 am (UTC)“We all need to look into the dark side of our nature - that's where the energy is, the passion. People are afraid of that because it holds pieces of us we're busy denying.” ~Sue Grafton
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-08 12:50 am (UTC)Really love this - it leaves a bitter aftertaste, like good coffee. Keep it up!
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:52 am (UTC)But O, how bitter a thing it is to look into happiness through another man's eyes. ~William Shakespeare
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Date: 2011-04-08 01:25 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-04-08 01:55 am (UTC)“Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy.” ~Nora Ephron
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Date: 2011-04-08 03:53 am (UTC)Love you for making second part :D~
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