FMA Drabble: The Poem

[lynx212]

Title: The Poem from the fic Heartfelt
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Words: 100
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Rating: T
Summary: The Poem Roy got from Ed
A/N: I am so blaming seatbeltdrivein for putting this idea in my head so this one is for her ^_^


My favorite coat is red
Your eyes are blue

You're an Old Man
Who doesn’t know what do.

I’m no romantic this you know.
I usually don’t do this shit, but for you I’ll give it a go.

You call me short and I call you Sparky.
Us trying to stay mad is just a bunch of malarkey.

You’re a bastard, I’m a smart ass, but we make things work.
It would all pan out nicer, if you weren’t a jerk.

My boots are black and your gloves are white
I bought the gift, so I top your ass tonight.

Comments

[vexed_wench]

hehe
that is so Ed.
Great job.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

Thanks chic a dee ^_^

[seatbeltdrivein.livejournal.com]

OMG XDD

That's so Ed! My favorite line: "It would all pan out nicer, if you weren’t a jerk."

SO VERY ED-LIKE. Love this <3 Glad I could inspire! ^^

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL I am so glad you made that suggestion in you comment!! *hugs on you*

[baroqueangel.livejournal.com]

That is brilliant and so very priceless XD <33

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*heh heh heh* thank you my dear *kisses hand*

[snarry_fan7]

XD Just the thing Ed would write to Roy, lol. Very cute (not that Ed would like to hear that).~Sophia

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*giggles* no Ed would not like the cute part even though we all know he's adorable ^_^

[binaryalchemist.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh fuck! I just snorted green tea up my nose and spewed it all over the keyboard. this is EPIC WIN!!!!!

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL your comment made me laugh just as hard as writing this did. *hugs on you* sorry about the tea *passes you a fresh cup and a napkin*

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

HA.

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

OMG... I was laughing so fucking hard after I read this!! FTW my dear!! ;D

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*snickers* glad I could amuse you my dear *hugs on you*

[ca11iope.livejournal.com]

Even unsigned, we'd all know who wrote it. :)

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL yes indeed we do. Ed has a unique style all his own ^_^ It was fun writing these 2 drabbles.

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

I startled my neighbours I'm sure with a bark of laughter at this poem (I was SO hoping you would post it!)

*SNORTS*

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*heh heh heh* I couldn't resist once the idea was put in my head. i adore writing a comical Ed ^_^

[amethyst_koneko]

^_^ This is so perfectly Ed I can almost hear him reading it! "I bought the gift, so I top your ass tonight" is pure win! XDDD

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Thanks for the praise lady! Glad it amused you it was fun to write ^_^

[lazylamia.livejournal.com]

Only Ed can write a love poem sounding so... insulting :)

[lynx212.livejournal.com]

LOL ya know? Insulting yet comically Ed ^_^ Thanks for the comment love *hugs*