huh, I'll admit I didn't see that one coming. I was afraid this story was going to turn out to be something not so nice. However, that quickly changed as Ed elaborated on his story. That and the idea of Roy Mustang nearly heartbroken over the whole thing was pretty dramatic. Aw, he trusts Ed. He should. The end was very cute and very funny when Havoc revealed that he was awake and had heard everything.
Surprisingly the story made perfect sense. That and Edward wasn't exactly sober at the time either. Poor Havoc, he's lucky Ed was there. The ruined clothes in the hallway seemed to corroborate Ed's story pretty well anyway. This was a cute little fic. I quite enjoyed it. You certainly kept the suspense going. Nice job. ;)
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Date: 2012-05-27 01:20 am (UTC)Surprisingly the story made perfect sense. That and Edward wasn't exactly sober at the time either. Poor Havoc, he's lucky Ed was there. The ruined clothes in the hallway seemed to corroborate Ed's story pretty well anyway. This was a cute little fic. I quite enjoyed it. You certainly kept the suspense going. Nice job. ;)