Mmm...very delicious! You definitely captured the heat and the tension of the moment. I'm really curious about what happens next and I'm glad to hear there will eventually be more. The first person tense is definitely a bit strange for this fandom but you pulled it off very well.
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dancing_serpent
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Date: 2012-05-08 05:28 am (UTC)