lynx212: (Al Devious)
lynx212 ([personal profile] lynx212) wrote2013-05-26 03:05 pm

Invidia: XXII

Title: Invidia: XXII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Verse: Invidia
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lynx212
Words: 300
Rating: M
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al is so proud of himself. Everything is going to be perfect... just like his Brother.
Random Quote: In a dark time, the eye begins to see. ~Cavett Robert
A/N: Please Note the ratings change

Previous Parts

The look on your face is priceless. I knew you’d be surprised at all the hard work I’ve done. I’m even impressed with myself. I couldn't believe I remembered so many details, everything from the color of the lamp on the dresser, to the pattern of the quilt on your bed.

“It’s just like stepping back in time isn't it Brother?”

Your perfect face grows pale and you start shaking your head back and forth, but I can explain.

“I know my bed is missing and we didn't have a bathroom connected to our room like this one has but other than that don’t you think it’s exactly the same? Doesn't it look just like our old room?”

You don’t answer me but it’s ok. I can only imagine how big a surprise this has to be for you. I walk away from you, cross the room and sit down on the bed. As I run my hand over the hand stitched quilt I've replicated, my mind wanders back to the first time I knew you were destined to be mine.

You had just come out of the bath. Your hair was still wet and lying on your shoulders because you hadn't cut it in months. Even though we’d both just exercised and bathed you dropped and did twenty-five more push-ups. You did them with no problem and looking smug, you crawled into bed.

I can remember admiring your strength and longing to touch muscles that were just forming even if I didn't know why. I remember the uncomfortable tightness in my pajamas and wondering what had caused it.

I also remember how it felt to relieve that tightness and how I thought about you the entire time.

I’m always thinking about you Brother… I don’t think I’ll ever stop.

[identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY UPDATE!

Dark Al, ftw! :D (Yes, I'm twisted, lol.)

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I am twisted too so it's ok.

Before this is over I think dark Al is going show us all how twisted is really done.

[identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Insane Al is coming along nicely I see :)

You know I love your dark little Al, he is all the crazy <333
Edited 2013-05-26 19:14 (UTC)

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs* Thank you my dear Dark Al is indeed much love.

I'd hug him but I don't want to get that level of crazy on me.

[identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Jeez, this is freaking me out. Keep up the good work. :)

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you and I shall try my dear... I love Crazy Al.

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2013-05-26 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Al definitely has a fixation but who can blame him?? I love that he's obviously been planning this for quite some time. It shows just how far gone he really is, I have a feeling he has much in store for Ed in order to convince his brother that they truly are destined to be together. Great job hun and looking forward to more. <3

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you my dear. Al is well and truly gone and yes he has been planning this for quite some time so he won't be giving up his Ed without a fight.
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)

[personal profile] amethyst_koneko 2013-05-26 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I second ca11iope. Crazy!Al is freakin' me the hell out! :) In spite of that, more please! ^_^

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you my friend. Al has definitely gone off the deep end and this is only the tip of the iceberg...
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[personal profile] vexed_wench 2013-05-26 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Dark Al never lets me down <33333333

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs* So glad Dark!Al is going strong!
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[identity profile] genjyosgirl.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh. Gets me all shivery, thinking about how Al has been planning all of this. not entirely creepy shivers, either...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes Al has had this planned out for quite some time. He had no intention of ever being without Ed and Roy Mustang coming along wasn't part of the plan.

[identity profile] goldfishlover73.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man! An update! *fist pumps*
I had forgotten why this was so great. Dark Al is so creepy!
Poor Ed.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for the praise *hugs*

Dar Al is creepy and the real twisted thing is he is only getting warmed up.

icon love

[identity profile] zachemja.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Just found these-so intrigued, my dark fic and elricesty cravings have been reawakened

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-27 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome aboard the Dark/Crazy Al train my dear. It's nice to have you.

We all like a bit of elricest at times... you are not alone.

[identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com 2013-05-28 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Dark Al--watching your insanely sexy brother...damn, my pajamas would have gotten tight over that too (if I had anything to make 'em tight, that is!). So glad for an Evil!Al update!!!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2013-05-28 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you chic a dee. As creepy as it is I love writing him this way... he just twists so damn nicely ^_^

[identity profile] shell-mel.livejournal.com 2013-06-04 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
An update! This is brilliant! Dark Al is so scary but yet so interesting at the same time. I can't but wonder if Roy does manage to save Ed, what will happen to Al? Dead? Institutionalised? Enemy of the state? The possibilities are endless with this universe you have crafted! :D

[identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com 2013-10-21 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
*pokes at awesome dark!Al fic, leaving not so subtle hinting*

;-)