lynx212: (ETM: Brother's Elric)
lynx212 ([personal profile] lynx212) wrote2012-07-15 07:43 pm

Fullmetal Alchemist || Elricest || Observation

Title: Observation
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Verse: Elricest
Author: Little ole me ^_^
Genre: Angst
Words: 100
Rating: T
Summary: Pinako has noticed something that is sure to break her granddaughters heart.
Warnings: Incest
Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic_bakeoff and [livejournal.com profile] fandomwords100


I don’t know how to tell her.

As I watch Winry eyeing both brothers, I don’t know how to tell her she’s trying to make a decision that already been made… without her.

Ed’s wild passionate nature and resolve captivates her as does Al’s sweet positive charm and warm heart. Problem is those two sets of traits complement each other very well. A fact I think the brothers have figured out.

This won’t be pretty and if the death glare Al just gave her for touching Ed is any indication I need to find a way to tell her soon.

[identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh. YES. THIS needs to continue!!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it my dear.

Hmmm I think you may be right this would be an intriguing series...

*icon love*

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah... Winry needs to know... Poor thing!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
I know even I fell sorry for her in this one... she's all in the dark and way more alone than she could possibly contemplate.

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah... *sighs*

[identity profile] patheticnemesis.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
*shivers*

I can just imagine the heartbreak this would inspire. Poor Winry - but at the same time, clever Pinako for picking up on the obvious :P

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
I know my heart went out to Winry int his one... poor thing is setting herself up for a really hard fall.

and yes Pinako is win in this... older people can just sense these things ya know?

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes Winry... get your hands the fuck off Al's man!! LOL

I loved this because of course I love the boys together... can we get some more please!!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
LOL yes you do love the boys together and we love you for loving them! *hugs*

*I can never get enough of this icon of yours*

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
I know... its a very lovely pic of the boys, sweet yet sexy!!

[identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Very well done!

And jealous!Al is SO MUCH LOVE. Watch out, Winry.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
*bows in thanks*

I love writing a jealous Al and I think a woman scorned has yet to get close to how bad I think Al would be over Ed *cough..invidia..cough*

[identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
I actually feel sorry for Winry, but I do love possesive Al <33

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
I feel sorry for her too... but possessive Al is such epic love!

*icon love*

[identity profile] sexkitten426.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, jealous!Al is so cute.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles* he is and dammit Ed is his and his alone!

[identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Winry. I know just how gutted I'd be if I couldn't have Ed and Al!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
I know poor thing is way further out in the cold than she thinks she is... I'd be gutted too

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2012-07-16 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Winry. Great job, Lynx.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks chic a dee and poor Winry indeed... this is bound to be an uncomfortable conversation between her and Pinako.

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2012-07-18 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome. Very uncomfortable.

[identity profile] shindkrow.livejournal.com 2012-07-19 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
>:p Take that Winry lol

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2012-12-01 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL ya know

*sorry for the late reply*