lynx212: (Ed Serious CoS)
lynx212 ([personal profile] lynx212) wrote2011-04-13 10:23 pm

Invidia: VII

Title: Invidia: VII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[info]lynx212 
Words: 300
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Ed keeps trying to get Roy to relax because there's nothing to be nervous about...it's all in his head...
Random Quote: “Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”  ~Albert Einstein


The first night of our trip was wonderful but today hasn’t been.

I don’t know what’s wrong with Roy but he’s jumpy and tense. At first he kept saying it was nothing but by the time he was jumping at every little noise as we walked back to the cottage from dinner I finally got something out of him.

He said he felt like we were being followed. Even though it stunned me at first I couldn’t keep from laughing at him. It was absurd. Not only do we not know a soul here we were in a sleepy little fishing town that hadn’t seen so much as a bar fight nonetheless anyone out to cause real trouble.

I tried to reassure him that it was just stress and his overworked nerves getting to him and that’s why we were vacationing to begin with. When he refuses to let it go I drag him out to the lake behind the cabin hoping the serenity of looking out at the moonlit waters will help him relax.

It had the opposite effect.

He spent the entire time flinching at every little noise and cricket. Back inside I tell him to have a seat and pour us each a glass of wine. I’d give him a shot of scotch if we had some.

I pull off his shoes and rub his feet as I tell him about Kain’s latest stray scaring the piss out of Breda. I only stop to refill his glass and thankfully halfway through it he is smiling. He apologized for being so wound up and I did my best to kiss his worries away.

I reminded him that even if we were being followed we were two highly trained alchemists and soldiers.

Who could get the jump on us?


[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
Stalker!Al...^^;

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Yes he is...and he has a plan.

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
*nods* Yeah?

[identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Ed's going to be sorry he didn't listen. :(

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Indeed he will be...more sorry than he could ever imagine

[identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 11:26 am (UTC)(link)
"Who could get the jump on us?"
Ed! Shame on you! Haven't you watched any classic American slasher movies?? Two lovers alone in the woods...and one of them starts to feel as if there are eyes following them??
Al...you're scaring the crap out of me and I love it!!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Ed must be behind way behind in his movie watching, had to be all that gallivanting around the globe.

This Al is scary and I am loving him this way ^_^

[identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*shudder*

God, the atmosphere in this series is so chilling.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for the praise my dear this is coming along even better than I had hoped. ^_^

[identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I really want to smack Ed for being so dense.

Still loving this <333

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
You and me both my dear but this is his beloved little brother that has lost his mind...it's going to take a lot for Ed to see it...

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Ed have you learned nothing from horror movies? XD

*waits for more like an impatient kid waits for cake*

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
LOL he has learned nothing it seems my dear *hands you fanfic cake (http://lynx212.livejournal.com/143400.html)*
Edited 2011-04-17 01:09 (UTC)

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2011-04-18 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Hurray!

[identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Famous last words...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
Yes indeed they are my dear...
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)

[personal profile] amethyst_koneko 2011-04-15 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
GAH! Clueless Ed is clueless! Who could get the jump on you? Only the last person you'd ever expect Ed! The one person you won't want to fight back against BECAUSE HE'S YOUR OWN BROTHER! *cue Friday the 13th music* tch-tch-tch-ha-ha-ha. AAAAAAAH! ^_^

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
OMG that music made me all nostalgic ... lol

And yes Ed is really really clueless but it's Al ya know his lovable baby brother he should have nothing to fear right...

[identity profile] billybar.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
This is really great! You've got it going very well... I mean, we're so used to seeing Al as a kind and ever forgiving boy, that to see this... huh... other side of him is really very interesting. :)What I mean is: you're doing a very good job! :)

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you so much!! I am new at writing darkfic so that means a lot to me.

Al is in no way the sweet kind meek soul he is often portrayed as in this series so it's been fun stepping out of the norm.

[identity profile] natekeehl.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
Now that's what I'm talking about!! Great Al making Roy paranoic ;D~

Go ahead and drive him crazy ewe~

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Roy will be more than crazy before this is over if Al has anything to say about it....

[identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
I finally caught up! *grins* I can't wait to see what exactly Al is going to do to prove Roy is horrible for Ed.

It's really cool to see the darker side of Al, by the way. (Shouldn't I be posting this in response to one of the Al chapters? o_o) I'm a big fan of the Al that's not as sweet and innocent as everyone seems to think, so this is just the kind of dark stuff that I see lurking. I babble, sorry!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
LOl you are fine talk as much as you'd like!

It has been fun writing Al this way. I think he's the perfect candidate for this type of lunacy, he's been through a lot and the only constant in his life was Ed.

icon love

[identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Who, indeed, Ed? Is Ed ever going to wise up? I know he loves Al, and normally would never suspect him of wrongdoing, but he's so clueless, it's scary!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
That's the downside of trusting and loving people. Your guard is down and its nearly impossible to contemplate nonetheless see the forest for the tress sometimes...

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG... Al is stalking them!! See... I told Roy to back the *f* off!! LOL

This story keeps getting better and better my dear!! :D

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
thank you so much little lady!! I am liking my creepy Al, he has issues and he's far from done...

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yay for more creepy Al... its odd but I find him rather sexy!! *giggles*

Oh btw... I wrote more Elricest... its in my journal if you care to read. Let me know what ya think!! :D

[identity profile] irishmoon7.livejournal.com 2011-04-23 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
this is so fun in it's creepyness. ...but this chapter worries me. It's not gonna get TOO dark in here is it? I'm all for awesome stalker!Al but if this turns into Deathfic I am going to CRY! And not in the good way! *Is very worried for Roy* >~

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-27 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Roy is indeed in trouble in this series but everyone is and they don't know (Al is a bit unhinged) but I don't think this will be a death fic...but I am a slave to my muse so I never know. If it comes to that it ill be in the warning area so no worries about walking into it blindly...

Thanks for the comment love I hope to hear from you again ^_^

[identity profile] irishmoon7.livejournal.com 2011-04-28 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
oh good, it was just a sudden 'oh crap what if...' kind of thought. I feel better now. Creep away Al, you're surprisingly good at it.