Invidia: IV

[lynx212]

Title: Invidia IV
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author: lynx212 
Words: 297
Rating: T
Summary: Al doesn't like Roy's influence over Ed he just wants what's best for him and what's best for Ed isn't Roy.
Warnings: It's getting darker in here....

 


It was so hard for me to smile as I listened to Brother carry on about his weekend plans with him. He’s such a lost little soul and when I think about it, he’s never really known what’s good for him. Forever searching for something, he just can’t seem to find. I’ve tried to keep him safe, I truly have, but I feel as if I failed him somehow for this to be happening.

He had to be starved for something I wasn’t giving him to turn to, Mustang.

I would like to know what lies Roy feeds him when I’m not around. It has to be something for him to be this excited over a mere road trip. It’s not like we’ve never traveled and their destination is not even to someplace he’s never been.

That alone is suspicious.

He asks me if I need the bathroom and when I say no he gathers up clean under clothes and a towel. When he disappears into the bathroom, I wait my usual six minutes before following him.

I ease the door open just a hair and even through the textured glass of the shower door I can tell the water is raining down upon perfection. Tanned, muscular, golden perfection. I never thought I would envy water but as I listen to it caressing him in ways I can’t, in ways he won’t let me, I… I…

The water turns off and I slip away from the door. I am down the hall when he strolls out of the bathroom, still damp and wearing nothing but his boxers. He smiles at me when he passes making my fingers twitch and my pants grow tight.

It takes all of what remains of my fading resolve not to touch him.

 

 

Comments

[nochick-fics.livejournal.com]

OMG Lynx... this is sooooo goooood.

[binaryalchemist.livejournal.com]

::BITES LIP:: oHHHH...THE TENSION....you've got me hanging on tenterhooks....will Al...or won't he??
::fans self and waits impatiently for update::

[kettle-cat.livejournal.com]

Aww I love this series so much, I can't wait for the next part! The tension there is D:

[ca11iope.livejournal.com]

Oh my God, you made the hair go up on the back of my neck! *shivers*

[amethyst_koneko]

Oh jeez! Oh jeez, oh jeez, oh jeez! This is like watching a shark circle ever closer to an unsuspecting seal! Swim faster little seal! There's a deranged lunatic eyeballing you up for lunch! *whimpers and hides!*

Oh man, I'm afraid this isn't going to end well for somebody. Who pays the biggest price here I'm not sure but this definitely isn't going to end well. :( In my mind I keep seeing Roy having to singe Al a little bit to make him back down but if it came down to a battle between them I honestly don't know who would win....and that scares me even more. :(

[baroqueangel.livejournal.com]

Al just keeps getting creepier each time you write. I'm loving his warped ideas <33

[evilchuckles.livejournal.com]

Oh wow...this is so devastating. The psychology is bang on. Al has no idea what he's doing wrong, has he? How creepy he is? But I still feel sorry for him!

[kattrip033.livejournal.com]

WOW. You have created such wonderful tension. I really am loving every bit of this.

[havemy-heart.livejournal.com]

This keeps getting better and better :D

[vexed_wench]

Poor Roy *sniffles*

[natekeehl.livejournal.com]

asdf I love you for keeping up with this ;A;

come on Al! I encourage you to touch your brother, he'll like it, really <3

[hpfangirl71.livejournal.com]

That part was amazing!! And to think Ed doesn't even realize the affect he's having on poor Al...

[zachemja.livejournal.com]

Usual 6 minutes, shit Al, creepy!