lynx212: (Al Devious)
lynx212 ([personal profile] lynx212) wrote2011-06-26 05:02 pm

Invidia: XVII

Title: Invidia: XVII
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author
[info]lynx212  
Words: 255
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Al sits with his precious captive and his mind wanders...
Random Quote: “Perhaps a lunatic was simply a minority of one.”  ~George Orwell

Previous


You don't fear the dark dear brother, you don't fear being tied down... you fear being tied down within the confines of the darkness.

I know this, because it is a gift The Gate bestowed upon us both.

I’ve been standing here breathing in the scent of you and caressing your perfect face for hours as I’ve waited for you to regain consciousness. When you finally wake with a groan I can hear your heart thudding as you look around even though you know you can see nothing. As your senses come back further I hear you shift and the realization that both of your automail limbs are gone must be washing over your limited awareness because the sense of panic that surrounds you dear Brother skyrockets.

I take a step closer to you and you call my name saying how this wasn't funny any more and for me to quit kidding around.

Even as you say that I hear the fear in your voice and I know despite your words you know just how serious I am. How this is not some twisted joke and how in truth this is only the beginning.

When I tell you this, your breathing picks up as you plead for me to untie you so we can talk this out. I don’t answer you, instead I walk away as you scream my name in a pleading and desperate manner that would surely have broken my heart if it wasn’t exactly what I wanted to hear.
 
 

[identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com 2011-06-26 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Crazy Al is back \o/

Now where's Roy and the rescue party??

<333

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes crazy Al i back and his madness is reaching critical mass... the rescue party doesn't even know they are needed yet... poor Edo

[identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com 2011-06-26 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I have been looking forward to this, and dreading it at the same time. Keep up the good work. :)

[identity profile] sonjajade.livejournal.com 2011-06-27 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
THIS^^^

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you my dear I hope to get the next one out soon now that I'm human again ^_^

[identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com 2011-06-26 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, god--I was thinking about this fic today and was going to nudge-nudge beg-beg to see if you had an update coming...ooooohhhhh....Al....
Should I be ashamed that this is...well...a fucking turn on to imagine dear, sweet innocent Alphonse...so dark...so mad...so obsessed...
WOW.

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-06-29 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
If you hang your head in shame then I hang it with you my dear cuz crazy dark Al is fucking hott!! ;P

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
No my dear it is nothing to be ashamed of at all. I love a sick and twisted Al too and he just strikes me as the epitome of twisted once set down that path... we shall see where my muse takes him...
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)

[personal profile] amethyst_koneko 2011-06-27 12:33 am (UTC)(link)
*can only whimper in fear and dread the worst* :( Roy, where are you? help...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Roy doesn't even know his lover needs saving yet... *hugs you*

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-06-27 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
I got chills reading this... *shivers*

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*clings*

[identity profile] evilchuckles.livejournal.com 2011-06-27 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow...Al has totally lost it. Is it bad that I still feel sorry for him? He's been in such pain for so long and Ed just couldn't see it. Not that I really blame Ed because that's hardly what occurs to you about your own brother.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
No it's not bad, that's kind of the reaction I was going for with the readers... one where all of you would feel for and could relate to all of the characters stuck in the travesty. *hugs*

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-06-27 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Yay for more crazy Al!! I totally love this... so twisted and diabolical, you are amazing my dear!! :D

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you chic a dee glad to see you are still following this one... you need to update your fic as well *hint hint*

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
which one?? I have too many in the works to remember... I will update whichever one you want my darling... just say the word!! Glad to see you back and feeling up to parr again!! :D

[identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com 2011-06-27 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Been dying to see just what was coming next. Gotta tell you...the removal of the limbs just cinched that chest-tightening feel. It's scary and yet I'm eagerly awaiting the next bit! Good job, hon!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you my dear, Al has passed the point of no return and its going to be a bumpy ride from here on out.

[identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com 2011-07-28 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
I imagine so! By the way, is there a way that I could send you a song that totally made me think of this fic? Or would you rather I tried to find it on YouTube? :D Every time I hear this song, I think of this Al stalking Roy and Ed...

[identity profile] kyofujimiya.livejournal.com 2011-08-10 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Here is the link to the YouTube video for it, since people have asked about it. It's a little creepy, but then again that's the point right?

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2011-06-28 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. Would it be childish of me to demand more and throw a tantrum until there is?

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL no it wouldn't I shall try to get an update out son ^_^

[identity profile] kattrip033.livejournal.com 2011-07-30 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Yay!

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no is right and he's just getting warmed up...