lynx212: (Roy Thoughful)
lynx212 ([personal profile] lynx212) wrote2011-04-11 07:55 pm

Invidia: V

Title: Invidia: V
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Characters/Pairing: Roy/Ed, one-sided Al/Ed
Author: lynx212
Words: 300
Rating: T
Genre: Angst/Darkfic
Summary: Sometimes figuring out the truth isn't the grand relief it's made out to be. Roy fins this out the hard way...
Random Quote: “Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torment of man” ~Friedrich Nietzsche


Ed isn’t worried so maybe I shouldn’t either.

After all, he does know Al a lot better than I ever could. The closest I ever got to the young man was when he was searching for Ed. Even then, he kept his distance from me. He never got as comfortable with me or anyone in the office as Ed had been.

I thought that perhaps that was his way of keeping motivated. To never let himself get comfortable in a life and environment that didn’t include his Brother. Comfort leads to acceptance and that was a big no-no.

Regardless, there’s something about the way Al behaves that makes me uneasy. I can’t put my finger on it, but I don’t like it one bit.

As the two approach the train station, I observe them. Ed’s facing forward, walking with his suitcase in one hand and coat draped over his shoulder. You would think Al would look similar minus the luggage but no. He’s walking just slightly behind Ed, still beside him but not parallel. Not enough so the casual observe would notice, but I’m not doing this casually. I’m looking for something and I think I just found it.

Al’s not looking forward. He’s not looking at the trains or at the people milling about. He’s looking at Ed. The look he’s giving his clueless sibling is all too familiar to me. It’s the same look I feel on my face every time I see blonde hair and golden eyes.

An instant before I avert my eyes his lock onto mine and he flashes me a smile that isn’t warm or comforting.

If anything it’s predatory.

When Ed turns to face him that look melts away leaving the Al we all know and love.

What have I gotten myself into.

[identity profile] nochick-fics.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Creepy Al is creepy. Loving it.

[identity profile] ca11iope.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
Uh oh. They say fore warned is fore armed. In this case, I don't think it's going to matter. Can you say 'happy ending'? I don't think so.
amethyst_koneko: kitty Ed is love! (Default)

[personal profile] amethyst_koneko 2011-04-12 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
OOOH! Battle lines have just been drawn! Let the fireworks begin! \o/ I'm wondering now what Al will do when Ed finally figures out what's going on here and tells Al he doesn't love him like that. The possible outcomes of this that are bouncing around in my head right now are not pleasant at all. :(

[identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
I love this so much!! Obsessed!Stalker!Al is my new favorite thing :D Mustang better watch his back.

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Creepy stalker!Al... me likies! :D

[identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
Wow...this is SUCH a unique take on Al...I don't think anybody's ever dared go there with Al as the jealous predator vs Roy....brilliant...MORE!!!!!

[identity profile] baroqueangel.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
*is lost for words because that was chilingly brilliant*

You're really cracking on with creepy Al, I like it :P <3333
vexed_wench: (Default)

[personal profile] vexed_wench 2011-04-12 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I do adore this.

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed he is and it's only going to get worse... *hugs on you for reading*

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
You are so correct my dear this will not end in rainbows...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Another nice analogy chic a dee. The battlefield has been set and there can really be no winner in this one...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes he had better because Al is not playing around...he wants his Ed and he won't stop until he has him...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
\0/ good to hear chic a dee...I am liking him too.

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! Sweet!! I hope this'll mean wer'll see more of him! :D

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes hard* I am trying hard to take him out of his fandom comfort zone and into the realm of the psychotic that I think he could easily be given what him and Ed have lived through...

Luffs on you for the praise. ^_^

part six will be up in a few moments

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks babe I am loving Al in this light. This dark angsty tortured light...

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs* Good to hear since this is kinda your fault...lol

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Part six going up now...
vexed_wench: (Jack!)

[personal profile] vexed_wench 2011-04-12 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
My fault? O.O okay blame me :)

[identity profile] kiramaru7.livejournal.com 2011-04-13 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet! I'll ahve to look for it, since I don't recall seeing it on my Flist. XD

[identity profile] natekeehl.livejournal.com 2011-04-13 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Roy you won't win over Al so be ready ;D
Al giving a predatory smile = ♥

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-14 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
*heh heh* Al is not to be taken lightly...

You have been a great supporter of this series...*HUGS ON YOU* much thanks ^_^

[identity profile] hpfangirl71.livejournal.com 2011-04-15 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes Roy... what have you gotten yourself into?? you may as well back to *f* off right now!! LOL

[identity profile] lynx212.livejournal.com 2011-04-16 08:30 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL I am sure before this is over he will wish he had taken your advice