Thanks *grins* I am in no way offended by what you had to say and I am so glad the effort I extend shows and is appreciated. I am actually happy to hear what you have said. I would be upset if my writing didn't grow and change so hearing that it has is quite the compliment to me. ^_^
I am glad you like Riza's comparison ... it almost got canned because I thought it may come across as corny to you guys (glad I left it now)
I really wanted to give a new spin on how these two get together and I really wanted them to become friends first and love grow out of that (especially Ed's character) so often I read how Ed's been carrying this torch for Roy for years and something happens and Roy finds out blah blah blah...Now don't get me wrong I read and do enjoy those fics but I wanted to WRITE something much different. I also really wanted Roy to be the one doing most of the pining and Ed having more control of the situation. (It's hard to write a lovesick Roy and keep him anywhere near IC).
Toss all of the concrit my way you want to I love it ^_^ Thanks for taking the time to leave such a detailed comment *hugs*
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I am glad you like Riza's comparison ... it almost got canned because I thought it may come across as corny to you guys (glad I left it now)
I really wanted to give a new spin on how these two get together and I really wanted them to become friends first and love grow out of that (especially Ed's character) so often I read how Ed's been carrying this torch for Roy for years and something happens and Roy finds out blah blah blah...Now don't get me wrong I read and do enjoy those fics but I wanted to WRITE something much different. I also really wanted Roy to be the one doing most of the pining and Ed having more control of the situation. (It's hard to write a lovesick Roy and keep him anywhere near IC).
Toss all of the concrit my way you want to I love it ^_^
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a detailed comment *hugs*