I love a good romance. I love smut. I love a good romance, well developed characters and yes, I do love my smut. I adore Ed and Roy pairings, my second favourite is Roy and Maes…note the Mustang theme XD.
The title struck me for its originality, next, I checked the pairing. I scrunched my nose, not because I don’t like Havoc, I think him a hoot, but the eventually Roy/Ed made me pout and then I began to read…and read….and realized that thankfully, you had put them all together in your memories file. I hurriedly and happily printed off all parts and since around post dinner have been reading without cessation and smile, and roll my eyes and enjoyed thoroughly the budding romance, the depth of writing and time and effort spent in developing the two. The ‘desmugging’ of Roy, the evolution of Ed, the firm bonds of friendship displayed with the FMA gang and found more often than not a huge ass smile on my face as I became immersed in their slow and careful dance…towards a relationship.
I find you have done a wondrous job in enmeshing me in a love story. Please continue and when you have time, there are like 5 entire (wink) typos in there. KILL THEM please, such loveliness should not be marred.
Exceptionally charming, loving, kind and ever so warm. You have me already sans smut. That says much. If you have an update list, please add me to it. Oh and don’t even think on not finishing this story. I will make voodoo dolls and sharp implements will find their way to you…yes, you have been duly threatened with bodily harm.
Underneath It All
The title struck me for its originality, next, I checked the pairing. I scrunched my nose, not because I don’t like Havoc, I think him a hoot, but the eventually Roy/Ed made me pout and then I began to read…and read….and realized that thankfully, you had put them all together in your memories file. I hurriedly and happily printed off all parts and since around post dinner have been reading without cessation and smile, and roll my eyes and enjoyed thoroughly the budding romance, the depth of writing and time and effort spent in developing the two. The ‘desmugging’ of Roy, the evolution of Ed, the firm bonds of friendship displayed with the FMA gang and found more often than not a huge ass smile on my face as I became immersed in their slow and careful dance…towards a relationship.
I find you have done a wondrous job in enmeshing me in a love story. Please continue and when you have time, there are like 5 entire (wink) typos in there. KILL THEM please, such loveliness should not be marred.
Exceptionally charming, loving, kind and ever so warm. You have me already sans smut. That says much. If you have an update list, please add me to it. Oh and don’t even think on not finishing this story. I will make voodoo dolls and sharp implements will find their way to you…yes, you have been duly threatened with bodily harm.
ElegantPaws