You're most welcome XD Second person is always tricky and I totally understand being a slave to the muse! (Mine likes to torment in the middle of the night with epic plots). I think the hardest part about second person is maintaining a character's voice while getting through important exposition like location, who's doing what, etc.
Last lines, not to be repetitive, are also tricky especially when you aren't quite sure (in this particular case) whether you want to continue said piece.
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Second person is always tricky and I totally understand being a slave to the muse! (Mine likes to torment in the middle of the night with epic plots). I think the hardest part about second person is maintaining a character's voice while getting through important exposition like location, who's doing what, etc.
Last lines, not to be repetitive, are also tricky especially when you aren't quite sure (in this particular case) whether you want to continue said piece.