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2012-05-06 06:43 pm (UTC)
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Thanks for the con-crit! *hugs*
I hadn't really thought about how the second person would be taken as this is how it came to me and I am a horrible slave to my muse.
As for the last line I'm not so sure about that either... lol
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I hadn't really thought about how the second person would be taken as this is how it came to me and I am a horrible slave to my muse.
As for the last line I'm not so sure about that either... lol