Woa, I'm the worst beta ever, I didn't know there was more fic here! I don't log into Bloodwords very often, sorry about that (when life happens, which is almost always, fan fiction is the first thing to suffer).

Yey fic! This is a great chapter, the part with Jean and Ed feels like a particularly real (if that makes sense) conversation, kind of painful and confused and with all sorts going on there that neither character is fully aware of.

As an aside note, I'm still happy to look over stuff if you want me to, just send it to the e-mail address I gave you as I check that one more regularly.