This is a great story! I read this ages ago on fanfiction.net but couldn't remember the name of it and so couldn't find it again when I wanted to see it there were any more chps. So glad to find it again!
I really like the way your portray Roy - so human, with vulnerabilities like anyone else. Particularly the earlier part about how it's not just not messing up his friendship with Ed but also not wanting to hurt Havoc, I don't know why but the fact that he feels conscious that Havoc is hurt when women (now potentially Ed) leave him for Roy, it makes me want to say "Awww".
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Date: 2011-04-18 07:23 pm (UTC)I really like the way your portray Roy - so human, with vulnerabilities like anyone else. Particularly the earlier part about how it's not just not messing up his friendship with Ed but also not wanting to hurt Havoc, I don't know why but the fact that he feels conscious that Havoc is hurt when women (now potentially Ed) leave him for Roy, it makes me want to say "Awww".